A Silent Rhapsody

Description

Feeling the vibration was the only thing he could do to differentiate notes and sounds, and if he was working in a noisy room, it was really hard to distinguish the vibes. Some people might not believe it when he said he was deaf since he could play the violin, and sometimes it took extra effort to explain the fact if they had listened to his performance.

Foreword

A oneshot by Theslymaknae

Disclaimer : I wish. I wish I own Jinki and Kibum, but sadly no T_T

this is purely fiction, any similarities with living and or dead objects are.. well, some are intended. Don't sue me, though~

 

English is not my first language, so I apology for the grammatical errors and other mistakes.

 

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theslymaknae
it's been awhile since the last time i wrote something, hope this won't ... :)
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Jinkeyk #1
Chapter 1: Beautifully written <3
oneweez #2
just plain beautiful piece of artwork. T.T
bbonkey #3
Chapter 1: OMG so beautiful ;;~~~;; <3
Ilonahaku #4
Chapter 1: OMG, it was so beautiful and sweet! <3

I like that the beginning is from narrator´s point of view, so we can imagine sounds. I really wonder, if deaf people can sense clapping crowd, or they just see them moving their hands. Now I think I asked a really stupid question. -.-

Haha, Key wore a pink tuxedo? Something like from Etude CM. XD
Haha, I cant imagine a guy in pink clothers in opera house, but I find it funny and fitting Key´s personality. XDD He was so cute when he started to apologize to Jinki. :D So he took his seat? XDD Good coincidence, I like that it was the moment when they stood close to each other. And I also like how they kept thinking about each other. :D

I found your description of tones amazing, and description of Key´s voice was also written wonderfully! I find it really nice that it is Key, who sings opera in this story. :)

Please, don´t kill me, but I found your typo funny - you wrote dead instead of deaf - "First, he took his seat. Second, he didn’t realize that the other was dead."

I love how their relationship progressed, how they shared touching moments, how they fell in love. I love that Jinki always gave big smiles to Key... I would melt, if I was Key. XDD
I found it really very cute, how Key was nervous around him, how he wasnt sure how to confess, although he knew that Jinki is aware of his love. :D It was really great luck that they could get to know each other well thanks to their great collaboration. :)

I love this line: "That night, when Jinki and Kibum both waited for their late night bus. The January snow fell and landed on both guys, but Jinki could only feel the warmth of Kibum’s hand in his."

Their relationship was really cute and sweet and it left me with heart-warming emotions. :D
onkeyslove #5
Chapter 1: crieeeees of happiness :') this is soooooo beautiful. thank you authornim!!!!! i <3 u!!!!!!
marchsistaa91 #6
Chapter 1: aaa... love this story...
keep going...
I dunno why but I seem to like a story with some music basic or something like that..
mm.. you understand what I mean right?
since english isn't my first language and I still learning it.. :P
Fighting!!
Ilonahaku #7
It seems to be a wonderful story! :D
Because the description is written very well!
Looking forward to it! :)
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