Determined

Description

Time already passed like this,

I try looking for your traces, but they are erased

The last memories of you are locked in the rim of my tears.

Minseok could have left him just like that, but Lu Han is stobborn. He is going to prove Minseok wrong, and no matter how long it takes, he refuses to stop searching.

(on LJ.com)

Foreword

Word Count: Appx. 6000 Words

I have no idea where the hell is the quote in the description from, I found it noted in my notebook; so if you know, tell me so that I can credit.

Oh, and about the story... it involves cursing. You've been warned.

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dibsfortwo #1 Feb 10, 2013 21:27:33

Chapter 1: this was really nice. i really like the 'friendship' aspect to this and the very natural subtle hints of xiuhan. the story is not too poetic or flowery, but i prefer this. it feels almost 'realistic'?

which is why since this is your first romance, please write more xiuhan, pretty pls? <33

midnightflight #2 Feb 9, 2013 23:48:39

Chapter 1: kyaaaah~ it's so cute, really.

candymints #3 Feb 9, 2013 17:43:07

Chapter 1: "You don’t deserve me. But I deserve you. I waited for so long that I have all rights to keep you beside"me as long as I want.” perfect <3

MissMun #4 Feb 8, 2013 21:11:59

Chapter 1: I love that they end up being together again~ yay! \o/
cursing!luhan = <3
glad that minseok finally realized that he's an idiot and he's the one came to luhan x)
and yixing being yixing = <3
huhuhu write more happy fluffy romantic xiuhan please xD

smiley44 #5 Feb 8, 2013 19:35:13

Luhan is suffering because he can't find minseok, but he is so close with luhan xD
I like it. :D

adorkyuble #6 Feb 8, 2013 19:00:46

Chapter 1: awwwwwwwwwwwww this is adorable! i really enjoyed it! and you've done effing amazing considering this is your first fic! better than my first fic that's for sure! and i really liked luhan's characterization. haha and i really loved the friendship scenes. they were awesome and the break up part was very well written! why don't you have any comments?! freaking hell xiuhan shippers, you guys need to leave some feedback for this awesome fic!