Chapter 1: definitely infatuation gurl..definitely..but dont we all...they serve us well in the fandom..pretty boy g to the d...kyaaa..upss way tooooo old for this..ekekeke..oh well..who care!

Chapter 1: Whoo! That was a beautiful, but short, one-shot! I love how you took inspiration from a poem; it's refreshing. ^^

Chapter 1: Oh wow. Really good! Wouldn't have thought poems could give inspirations like this! I should definitely read more stories and things so I could get my writing mood back in gear~! >.<

Very short but interesting to read c: There are a few mistakes though... But very good nonetheless!