Teasing Teaser

Mine
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After having finished a long day of recording, Kim Jaejoong sighed a little. He smiled as he made his way through the various crew and help, smiling at them in turn politely for all their hard work making "Mine". Jae was satisfied. The MV had come out beautifully and the message of the lyrics was going to have such a powerful effect. Everything was set. The young singer took a swig of his water bottle before packing up, bowing to the director, and making his leave. He was thankfully done for the day and he just needed to check in with a quick text to his manager before heading back home

Excitement took over him at this point. This was always the best part of any day...getting to come home to the love of his life, Jung Yunho.

Happily, Jae reached for his phone to begin furiously texting his boyfriend , already really eager to see what he thought of the concept teasers.

JJ; you saw already, right Yunnie? =D

YH; asffsaddsafg! Of course! Not like I don't stalk your tag on tumblr :P

JJ; ehehe ^.^ you like?

YH; aniya~ I just thought keysmashing was fun ~ ;P of course pabo! <3 get home. Like now ><

JJ; omo~ eager to see me? Waeyo? Haha xP and I think its gonna be a while~ traffic is slow >.>

Little did Yunho know that Jae's filming site wasn't far from their apartment at all. The boy had just felt like teasing his love as he was already rushing home himself, taking the stairs now two at a time.

YH: walk if its faster!! And

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Amalya #1
Chapter 1: It's certainly fluffy with a hint of comedic teasing and the first commenter is right in that it doesn't come off as a first fic. Any reason you vacillated between semicolons and colons to denote speakers during the texting sequence?

Aside from that, I appreciate the way you introduced us to Jaejoong and how he still respects those he works with first before finally getting up with his now boyfriend/lover. hehe And the final comment he makes at the end also made me giggle in regards to that. But I could easily see them teasing each other just like that too. I'm surprised Yunho didn't know exactly where Jaejoong was filming though. >.> haha Maybe Jae's just good at keeping secrets from Yunnie. lol

Their sequence together before heading into the bedroom was fast but judging from Yunho's mindset, that's expected. heh The only thing I might suggest for dialogue purposes is to have a tag of translations at the end or something for the Korean you chose to use. Some writers don't recommend using it at all, and I've been guilty of incorporating it myself, though for the uninitiated, it can be confusing when you stumble across 'palli' or 'waeyo' or any of the other terms without understanding what they mean.

Overall though, good job for a first go. ^_^ (on a side note, I'm sad I can't see the picture T_T - I don't think tumblr works in China)
ClosetBLGirl #2
Good to hear~ ^~^ / /
Syana1 #3
Chapter 1: Awwww this is hot...hahahaha like seriously...I love it^^
ohmyyunjae #4
Chapter 1: this is a really great story!!
jae' waist is soooo small in the pic!!yun is so lucky to hold i everyday!!><
Kreecherkai #5
Chapter 1: Pft...so adorable. _____ _____ Yunho :D attacking Jae
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