Bound To Forget

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exoticshawol125 #1 Jul 16, 2014 03:14:58

?? What happened

CodeNameSarang #2 Apr 27, 2011 01:58:17

OOOOOOOO~~~~~~~ even though its kinda short, its awesome. :D Hwaiting for the next update~ :D

musiqsoulELF #3 Apr 25, 2011 08:08:17

the summary is suspenseful which is good, but a few mistakes, its not dowrning but *drowning, and at "But there isn't much time" wrong tense, supposed to be "But there wasn't much time". yep the rest is okay then, hope this helps ^^ HWAITING~(:

CodeNameSarang #4 Apr 25, 2011 06:58:08

choayo~ :D