My prince charming ..?

Description

Ever since Christie had started reading romantic love stories, she wanted to find the perfect guy to be her prince charming. she had a slight crush on the popular senior, Cheondoong. She had drawn pictures of him & wrote down all the things she liked & disliked about him. while hanging out with her best friend/senior, Key, he read her notebook while she was gone & found out about her senior crush. when christie realizes that key had found out she started to panic. Surely Key oppa wouldn't tell his friend Cheondoong would he?! But instead of telling Cheondoong, he decides to help christie out. Will Christie get her prince charming?

 

Character(s):

  • Christie
  • pretty & has a crush on cheondoong
  • outgoing, fun, loves to laugh

  • Cheondoong
  • Senior hottie, extremely popular
  • hasn't dated much, sweeet and extremely nice

Cute Key^^ - shinee photo

  • Key
  • best friends with Christie & Cheondoong
  • senior, amazing dancer, cute

  • Kikwang
  • best friends with Cheondoong and Key
  • senior, very muscular & popular for it

  • Min
  • One of Christies best friends
  • skilled dancer, loves to go to clubs, friendly

  • Victoria
  • Best friends with Christie
  • Shy, sporty, loves to shop

Foreword

Hey guys!

i love MBLAQ's Cheondoong so this is obviously going to be about him :) anyway this is my first fanfic ever, soo please comment & subscribe! I appreciate advice & criticism but please don't be too harsh on me, it is my first time. but please enjoy & i will try to update as often as possible!

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kimwayne #1
Your story is really reaaally similar to this one : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/21835#comments, isn't this plagiarising ?
durrrstephanie #2
I TOTALLLLLLLLY LOVE THIS STORY!
THUNDER IS MY LEGIT AND ULTIMATE BIAS! continue the story pleeeeeeeeease!
m0zarts0nata-- #3
OH MY~!!!LOVE THIS!!
buntae #4
I hope things won't be so awkward between Victoria and Key! Update soon~!
ilovethunder #5
@shalalapaula okay thanks.
buntae #6
@ilovethunder: Eep, cliffhanger! D : Hrm, I realized that you don't capitalize the first letter of the first word of each sentence. : x I think your fanfic would look neater if you started to capitalize. Hm, by the way, are Vic and Key going to find a boyfriend/girlfriend? They seem so lonely. : x Update soon~!
ilovethunder #7
@shalalapaula haha thank you for the advice! i deff agree, i'm just not really sure how to make it neater. but i will try! ^^
buntae #8
Annyeong~! New reader here. : 3 This fanfic is so cute, but it could need a bit of neatness. But you can ignore me and my criticism. ^__^ Anyways, you should escalate Min's/Kikwang's friendship soon! ^__^ Please update soon~
thelittlelolxki #9
thunder please confess to her A.S.A.P!!<br />
that jaeyoung guy is a jerk!!!!<br />
and sulli just back off because thunder belongs to christie!!!!<br />
update soon!!!<br />
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