Child of Life; Child of Death

Description

It was more than a curse that had been passed down; they were meant to be.

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ayoonism
#1
Chapter 1: omg... How abt do it as an on goin fic? Totally awesome!,
TheSolitaryReaper
#2
Chapter 1: Very nice and very original! ^^
NamelessWonton #3
Chapter 1: I really liked this! I agree with some of the others, you should do an on going with this plot. I'd totally subscribe to that. ^^
Derpy123
#4
Chapter 1: That's actually really... I was gonna say deep, but I'm not sure if that's the right word. I guess you could have made it a multi-chaptered story, but this length isn't bad either. Just probably a tad short for such a great storyline? :)
I enjoyed it anyway.
alemis
#5
Chapter 1: this story is so cooL
Mnetruinedmylife
#6
Chapter 1: Someone needs to write a full-length story of this...
Kayshi2001 #7
Chapter 1: I like this story. Nice emotions used
TYK309 #8
Chapter 1: Wow thats a very in depth shot