Superhuman

Description

To have a crush is normal. Usually the longest crush lasts for 4 months. If it exceeds that period of time, it means you are in love. That's what happened to Kim Inyoung.

Foreword

Okay this is just a story that I write during my free time. I'll try my best to update as frequently as I can. Promise! Oh, and take Kim Inyoung as a "you" character in this fanfic. Comments are highly appreciated! Subscribe if you want, upvote if you like it, criticize any weird parts of my fanfic and, enjoy!
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ParkMiyoung #1
Chapter 2: what was in that text? :S
btw I have some advice for you (English is my second language so I'll just try to explain as good as I can): you should make your chapters a bit longer..but most importantly; leave some space between the lines here and there. Like;

'She felt a bit afraid, but she made herself brave enough to go. - That Night - She stepped out from her bathroom.'

should be:

'She felt a bit afraid, but she made herself brave enough to go.


- That night -

She stepped out from her bathroom'
ParkMiyoung #2
Chapter 1: Oh yeah! Luna and donghae! <3 and inyoung with changmin? Interesting :D I'll sub!
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