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Another fail drabble here.. ehehehe.. 

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bloodymary
#1
Chapter 1: ;AAAAAA; /cries a river/ i love this fanfic. i feel so touched ._.
jimeulk #2
Chapter 1: Le sobs no baby ;A;
Words cannot describe how much I want to flip L.Joe ugh I just CAN'T
CHUNJI NOOOOOOO /sobs rivers/ I, Chunji needs to be alright or else I'm not forgiving L.Joe ;w;
Little djajdjjahdjsjhdjsnsndjsj I can't, MY KOKORO HURTS READING THIS
Good job bby <3
RandomShrooms1045 #3
Chapter 1: ...
I am...so sad right now...so sad...
But now I'm mad at L.Joe >:(
flowfuturistic
#4
Chapter 1: OMG... T_T ARGH L.JOE!!! >< how could anyone be indifferent to our poor chanhee and oh my... how the heartbreak chunji felt when he saw l.joe smiling with someone NOT him.. im so sad that the accident happened.. but perhaps l.joe would realise how much chunji means to him.. anyway i loved this short story so so much!!! and i really hope you can continue this <3<3<3 fighting author-nim! PS: STILL ANGRY AT CHICKENJOE.
miss-tery
#5
Chapter 1: Am I the only one that's not gonna comment with a lot of capital letters?
Anyway.. Awesome story! Hm... It's hard to respond 'coz I'm not sure whether he's cheating or not...
Okay, I've attempted to write a comment four times!
This is what I think (which will ultimately be different to your thinking)... I think L. Joe still loved Chanhee...
I don't know why but I feel that he still loved Chanhee and his feelings were getting mixed up (or it could just be his sis or cousin).... But you know he'll still end up with Chanhee. If it was anyone, the guilt of cheating would have already eaten them alive but L. Joe clearly didn't act guilty (this means he's a player or he isn't cheating). Chanhee is innocent and L. Joe clearly didn't waver. Also, his concern when Chanhee was in the accident is way more than acting.
I mean, hm... you know what?
I give up on trying to explain.
I think this was a great!
(My take on the story might not agree with most of your but um.. it's just my view on it and well, I might be wrong but this is how I see it)
elien23 #6
Chapter 1: BYUNGHYUN YOUR A JERK AND AN A**HOLE!!!!!!!!HOW CAN YOU LIE 2 CHANNIE FOR ____ING 4 YEARS YOU JERK I'M SOOOOOOO GONNA WRITE A FIC ABOUT YOU DIEING YOU JERK YOU DESERVE IT AND IF SOMETHINGS GONNA HAPPEN 2 CHANNIE THEN YOUR DEAD

sorry for my words i was just so damn angry but you did a good job author sshi
AdorableXingMyeon
#7
Chapter 1: I WANT TO KILL YOU LEE BYUNG HUN !!!!!! HOW DARE YOU MAKE MY CHANNIE LIKE THIS !!!! IF CHANNIE DIE ... I WANT TO PUNCH YOU ... I WANT TO CUT YOUR BODY ... AAARRRGGGHHHH ...
author ... im so sorry ... but pleas do something ...
ILoveYou_Forever #8
Chapter 1: ____ING STUPID BYUNGHUN!!!!!! 4 YEARS AND HE JUST KEPT LYING TO MY POOR BABY? I'M GONNA HUNT HIM DOWN AND CHOP HIM ALIVE! OMG THAT ____ING BASTARD! I CAN'T BELIEVE HE DIDN'T PAY ANY ____ING ATTENTION TO THE CARING AND SWEET CHANNIE WHEN THEIR ANNIVERSARY IS COMING NEAR...
*calm myself* Excuse my language, author-nim! I was just so mad... Anyway, pretty good job! *thumbs up*