Santa's Broken Sleigh

Description


It's Christmas Eve, only minutes to spare until it's finally December 25th. Kim Jonghyun has been working on his brilliant confession plan for weeks and weeks, and everything's ready and in place. He's ready to give Lee Jinki the most mind-blowing Christmas of his life - a visit from Santa, a weeks supply of chicken...and a kiss on the lips.

Minho always knew something was bound to go terribly, terribly wrong.

Entered in ❀ Welcoming 2013 || A Writing Contest ❀ by letsCOMPETE :)

WARNING 31/3/14: I WROTE THIS WHEN I WAS LIKE TWELVE I STRONGLY RECOMMEND CLICKING AWAY AND NEVER RETURNING

Foreword


*5 WEEKS AGO*

"Yeoboseyo?"

"Minho-ah," Jonghyun breathed, "Minho-ah, I have a plan."

"A plan? Hyung, what are you talking about?"

Jonghyun beamed as he sat on the wet bench in the gentle winter rain, staring across at the all-too-familiar house across from him.

"You'll never believe it, Minho, you'll never believe it."

"Jonghyun, what-"

"Minho-ah, I need your help."


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pannashawol
#1
Chapter 2: I loooove it!
DragonTopsThePanda
#2
Chapter 1: OMFG I COULD CRY <3
BEST FIC TBH
daringdarkangel5
#3
Chapter 2: OH MY!!! That was soo cutee.. Jonghyun all shy and adorable.!! And the ending oh my gish.. it was beautiful!! >) XD
haesthetics
#4
Chapter 2: omg it's dec and it's christmas month and i was looking through christmas fics and i love this so much it's so cute please don't tell me i for looking through your fics bc i love this so much it's so cute and i love how jonghyun just wants to make onew happy even though i dont ship it omg and when they kiss it's so simply yet beautifully described i want to cry adn hug you can you write me a christmas fic
AptonKey #5
Chapter 2: Banana milk
chaotic_tranquility
#6
Chapter 1: Kya! They all got what they wanted in the end :3 (Well, except for Minho, but he has Taemin so it's fine. :P XD)
Jinlicious
#7
Chapter 2: Gosh, it's so romantic!! I really like the shy side of Jonghyun! very well done ^^
SnHiromi #8
Chapter 2: wooooooooooooooooooooow!!!!!!!!!! O.O
This is amazingly creative ;D
I love the way Jonghyun confessed to Jinki oh gosh!! *-*
Jinlicious
#9
Chapter 1: Haha, Jonghyun, you idiot! Risking your life like that! But it's very cute tough xD
Great story, can't wait till you update.
Good luck with the contest!!