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adorateur- [Unavailable]
Hi there! I'm adorateur, the owner of this modest review shop. I may not be as experienced as some, but I do promise to try my best to give your story the review it deserves. Warning, I can be a little harsh at times, but I will try to keep it under control. I'm honest, but I don't think I have made anyone cry so far... Besides, it is through mistakes, we learn right? :P
 
On a more serious note, don't take my opinions too seriously. I'm not saying that I don't take my role as a reviewer seriously, but everyone has their own writing-styles and unique preferences so just because I didn't particularly like your story, it does not mean that no one else would. However that does not exempt you from trying to improve.
 
Conditions: Don't review
 
Some random facts if you want to know me a little better {feel free to skip through}
Favourite Kpop Artists: EXO, B.A.P., Bigbang, 2NE1, , Sistar, Teentop, Ailee, CCLOWN... maybe more?
Bias list ruined... Ultimate bias now = ~sassy diva Oh Sehun~
 
 
 
Divergin1004- 
Hello, it’s Divergin1004! Or you can call me Jam for short :3
Anyways, I’ve been of AFF for quite a while now, and I do have experience with reviewing! I like to be honest however I can be strict when I feel that your story is lacking. In terms of harshness, I’m a three to four point five out of four. I try to find ways to improve your story, and I also like looking at both the pros and cons of a fic.
I’m more of a spelling police and I can be picky sometimes on grammar. I’m more interested in the plot and the characterisation since I believe they’re the main aspects of a story. I’m a er for romance mainly.
But anyways! I love UKISS, Infinite, BtoB, Lunafly and Nu’est however I do have interest in EXO, Beast, BTS and so much more! Ailee is my queen along with SNSD, KARA, Sistar and Lee Hi. My ultimate bias is probably my Sungjongie!
[P.S I ship Woogyu, Myungyeol, YaDong and ElVin really really badly!]
 
 
 
-hypnotized
ayoo, just call me Queenie. I'm 16 years old and I'm from Canada, and yes, I do have a polar bear as a pet.
I am myself a writer, so I understand some of the writers' hardships, but it doesn't mean I'm less harsh than the others. I'm not exactly a grammar Nazi, but I do hate it when writers make typical mistakes. Otherwise, spelling mistakes do tick me off at some times, but it honestly depends on your level of English as well.
I have been reviewing stories for about six months or so (I've been on AFF for a little bit more than a year), and I admit, I do tend to overlook some stuff. I don't believe that cliché stories are bad - it only depends on how can you make it your own, and how can you make it unique and special.
From a scale from 1 to 10 on level of harshness, I'm somewhere between a 5 and 6, only because I don't have that much experience just yet.
I also tend to be harsher when reading a story that doesn't suit my taste.

Otherwise, I'm a big fan of EXO, BTS, T-ARA & my friend recently got me into GOT7, B.A.P & ToppDogg. :)
Ultimate biases are definitely Baekhyun, Sehun, Luhan and Chen.
 
+ : Romance, Angst (both light and heavy), Dark, Supernatural, Dystopian, Fantasy
- : , Horror, Gore.
So-so: Yuri, Comedy, Romcom
 
Examples: 01 | 02 | 03 
 
 
 
HYUKanchovy
 
Hi guys! I am sixteen going on seventeen, and you can call me Jae if you feel like it. I joined Asianfanfics in 2011 and have been writing since then. As for reviewing, I have about slightly less than two years of experience, but I think I still have much to learn. If there's one thing that really puts me off, it's the incorrect romanization of Korean words, everything else is still understandable. I'm pretty strict but I don't think you'll be able to feel it since I try my best to put things nicely, unless, of course, you want me to be blunt. 
 
Putting aside that, my ultimate bias is Byun Baekhyun, hence I naturally enjoy reading stories about him the most. I read widely on EXO in terms of fan fictions; I've come across stories from the two polar opposites. Apart from that guy, I also read a lot of stories featuring other EXO members too. But the most important thing is: the choice of idol you write about is probably the last thing I think about.
 
Preferred: OC | Straight | AU | Romance | Fluff | Angst | Drama | Comedy | Fantasy | Mystery | Horror | Suspense | M-rated | Real Life | Chaptered | Completed 
 
Examples: 01 | 02 | 03
 
 
 
dennisse
 
I'm dennisse (a little obvious, I know). I write because I want to, I read because I feel like reading. I'm a little harsh and I don't like spelling/grammar errors. I mostly write angst and never , and I read a little bit of fluff.
I'm a YG Stan, mostly a VIP and a Team B stan at heart but I don't read fics from them, more specifically if it's a BigBang/2ne1 fic haha. I also listen to EXO, BTS, Henry, B1A4, Beast, K.Will, Jung JoonYoung, and many other boy groups. 
I read , but never yuri. I can do OC too. Kaisoo is my muse :)
 
Preferred | Straight | AU | Non-AU | Romance | Angst | Drama | Fantasy | Chaptered | Completed | Oneshot
 
 
 
duckydeul
 
I'm an inspirit and bana, im still in high school, i love to write using english (rather than my native language and ideky) i think im an anti social and i only read or yuri :)
 
Preferred | Yuri | AU | Romance | Fluff | Comedy | Fantasy | Mystery | Horror | Crime | Suspense | M-rated | Other | Chaptered | Completed | On going | Drabble | Oneshot
 
 
 
Eksoow [Busy] [Can only do beta-reading!]
Hello there readers, I'm the co-author. This is my first time being a reviewer and I'm hoping to get some experience by working through this shop. I give honest opinions and I will say everything needed to say when I review your works. I'm not that experienced, like I said this is my first time. But I promise to do my best to in reviewing you and your stories. 
 
I'm not that harsh, just in the grammar and spelling. I am very strict in that part and also in the description and foreword. Probably out of 10, I'm 9.5 when it comes to strictness level.
 
Don't be discouraged if I give you low scores because different people have different opinions. 
 
Favorite Groups and singers: TS, Woollim and YG groups and singers - all of them. Also, Ailee, IU, Teen Top and EXO. 
 
Bias: Henry Lau
 
 
 
 
 
 
Beta-reader
 
 
 
 
Kpopized [Unavailabe]
Hi everyone~! I've finally returned to Halo after a hiatus that lasted forever!! (Jk! Hahaha)
I decided I would not review. I'm helping expand this shop with a new department: beta-reading. My job is to read your rough draft and help you improve it. I will help with spelling and grammar mistakes, plot and story flow, etc. 
So that the story will not lose the flavor each author inevitably adds, you must work with me. The system is posted in the "How to apply for beta-reading" section of this shop.
I promise to try my very best to improve your story. Please cooperate. I will focus especially on grammar, spelling, and formatting.
 
Some random facts about me:
I'm Chinese-Indonesian.
I love the color blue.
Fandom oceans make me want to cry.
I like to think that I judge touchy situations fairly based on what I know.
Fandoms: OT5 Cassiopeia, ELF, VIP, Blackjack, Star1, EXO fan (please note I am NOT a stan ^^), etc.
 

Warning: I will not edit , , or yuri. Thank you for your understanding.

My email is [email protected]

 
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Divergin1004
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bibimbap_
#1
Hey! I just wanted to let you know that I have changed the name of my story from 'These Feelings I'll Never Say' to 'Mute Sentiments'. Sorry for any inconvenience caused!
TofuMafia
#2
I sent in reviewer application form! ^^
Divergin1004
#3
>>> All of you have been accepted!
redocean-
#4
Requested! Thanks in advance <3
Jinhwanderer
#5
I sent a reviewer application form :)
azure_bliss
#6
Chapter 2: Requested c:
Thank you in advanced.
jeje_bts
#7
I have requested ^^ Looking forward to it :)
Elythia
#8
Chapter 76: Thank you so much for the review! The story does focus on the characterization more than the plot, and thinking back, I could have done more to further develop the plot. I wrote this story because I wanted to show that the homewrecker isn't the only one at fault. I'll take note of the points you've mentioned in the characterization. Once again, thanks and I'll be sure to credit you! :)
serendipity--
#9
i've requested~
bibimbap_
#10
Requested~