Utopia Request & Review Shop (URRS) [Close]

Description

Creating A Perfect World and a Perfect Story For You!

Currently hiring reviewers and writers!!! Now that break is over and I'm back to school, I don't have enough time to do all the reviews and complete all the story requests. Fill out a form in the foreword if you're interested.

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Creating one shot story with your choice of.........

--->characters/pairing(s) /your bias

--->genre

--->plot/setting

--->anything you want me to include in your story

 

Let me help you create that perfect image.

There are truly many wonderful fanfics out there written by many amazing writers.

But even a good story can have a slight flaw or dissatisfaction.

Have you ever came across a story with a good plot and an exceptional conflict?

It was the best story you had every read in your whole entire life?

Everything about that story seems to tie in and you are...pretty much addicted to it.

But then  as you recall back to the story and think to yourself,

Hmmm....."It would had been perfect if these characters were in it rather then them."

Or...."Wow I ship this couple but the story is going no where."

Well, URRS is here to take any request of any one shot or short story.

 

Show me your Perfect World.

We all know that two heads are better than one.

Are any of you writers out there who are unsure about what you are writing?

Do you need someone to read your story and give you some comments or advices?

Feel free to let URRS read your story and I will give you a fair feedback.

Criticize is not allow in my personal moral. So don't be afraid. ^^

Shop Status

Open || Close || Hiatus

Close Mean Not Accepting any application!

Request Status

Accepting || Pending

 

Review Status

Accepting || Pending

 

 

Foreword

Before you do anything....

---->Subscribe first! (Don't unsubscribe okay^^)

---->Upvote is optional

 

Applying?

 Request Form

 Review Form

Employment Form

(Click on one of them)

Please comment after applying.

Currently not hiring anymore.

 

After Review or Request is done.

---->Comment if you like.

---->Credit shop for review in foreword.

---->Still thinking about upvoting?

 

But don't leave yet! I have something to say. :D

Please keep in mind that if don't want a fail one shot or short story, then don't request for it. 

It would be nice if you don't criticize my work but I am always open to comments and some tips for improvements. ^^

As for review here is as far as the grading rubric goes. I look mainly at the writing style, story development, writer's diction and tone.

I'm not much of grammar person myself so I won't go to deep into grammar.

I will rather focus on the story itself. I can surely tell you if you're on the right track, or the story is going no where with an on-going story.

If you're just simply looking for some good pointer or feedback, you can request review with out a rubric.

It is already included in the application.

 

Scoring Rubric

Title & Poster: _/10

Description & Foreword:_/10

Grammar/Spelling: _/20

Plot of the Story:_/15

Writing Style:_/20

Characterization:_/10

Originality:_/10

Reader's Reaction:_/5

Total:100 points

 

© Copy Rights

No copying stories. All story made in this shop is own by UwinLe.

Comments

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zasstar #1
Wanna request but it is now close, huhuu
ChibiMusicStar
#2
Chapter 8: Read it ^^. Will credit when using the lappy
CoolerThanYou #3
Chapter 1: Read my review! Thank you! I'll credit :3
zining
#4
Requested :D
zining
#5
Hi, I was wondering if you guys still accept Review requests, because it seems like you still marked the review requests as accepting.
ClouDYesung
#6
Hello, I sent in a job application form^^
junyoshi
#7
I sent in an employment form.
Hwang_Tiffany
#8
I sent in an application form :)
ChibiMusicStar
#9
Send request ^^
ClouDYesung
#10
Chapter 6: Thank you for the review! It was really helpful and I'll go back in the story to change some things since I'm not perfect^^ Thank you so much and I'll credit you for the review~