Chapter 9: $50,000

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Hey guys! I'm back! Sorry I haven't updated in awhile...I made a chapter like a week ago but then my computer went all berserk and deleted the chapter! I got ubber pooshed! And then I just didn't feel like writing it again...sorry all. TT^TT

Chapter 9:

Kim Hye-Ri's POV: $50,000

I knock on Baro's door.

"Jiyoung?" I call.

No answer.

Did she not hear me maybe?

"Jiyoung!" I call out a bit louder this time.

Still no answer.

"Jiyoung! You there? Your brother sent me here to watch over you. Please open the door." I say loudly, knocking on the door.

No answer.

I suddenly remember what Baro had told me earlier.

"Oh sorry about that...My sister she...she's not well..."

I begin to worry.

What if she fell or hit her head? What if she left the room and is wandering lost in the streets?

"Jiyoung!" I call frantically, pounding on the door. "Jiyoung! Please answer me!"

Finally after standing there for a few minutes pounding on the door trying to get Jiyoung to open it I remember that you don't need a key.

Just turn.

Finally something that flaw is good for!

I turn the door knob and immediately rush in.

"Jiyoung?" I call again, looking left and right. 

Not that there was much to look at. Their apartment was no bigger than mine.

[Just add these two rooms together. But the room still isn't too big for a motel room. This is still all ONE room. Kitchen, bed, couch, cabinets, that's it.]

I notice a big clumb on the bed, and pull down the cover a bit to see Jiyoung sleeping peacefully.

I let out a breath of relief.

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pandaboo2506
#1
Chapter 28: Awwww!!! But what happened to Baro's sisters?
shindongho940629
#2
Chapter 28: It ended and wow, my guess was oh so correct xD xD The ending nice though. But wow my you probably got the ideas from my comments ;) You did didn't yah? How TOP was actually alive, and Mr.Kang is really nice and well yeah.. IDK xD xD Good fanfic
shindongho940629
#3
Chapter 27: Wahh!! Update!! The FBI's were probably sent by Baro... And I think that Mr. Kang guys is nice or something? He's probably like TOP, maybe? I don't know... I'm not the author xD xD All I know is well... Hyeri's surname is Kim xD xD Not too sure of anything besides that yet xD
jennifer1801 #4
Chapter 27: Omg i cant take this anymore!!!!
shindongho940629
#5
This is so awesome!!!! Can't awit for the next chapter, though this was just updated few hours ago xD Where's Baro??... I actually found this looking for a TOP fanfic, but I was still happy cause I love them both Baro and Top, Im a VIP, BANA & Kissme and ~~IM CRAZY~~ I'll stay subscribed so... update? someday?....
Mariam8808 #6
Chapter 24: I LOVE BOTH OF THEM
XxidarkrainxX
#7
Chapter 23: Aww for a short chapter it was really sweet ^^
I just hope his sisters will be okay
HanLuNa #8
Chapter 22: omg omg upload soooon~~ and YES OMG YESSS luhan is aayyy >.<
tiffydn #9
Chapter 22: Yeeaahhh i saw luhans new y hair!!! XD
jennifer1801 #10
Chapter 22: Omg...nooohhhhhh!!!