Leave the Door Open

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Luhan's front door slammed shut in Sehun's face six year earlier at the end of their relationship.  Sehun thought that was the end of it.  But then, six years later, that door is open again.  This time though, when Sehun walks in, everything is not the way he left it. 

Foreword

A one shot for the exoticgrounds writing contest!  I chose the prompt "I'm tired of feeling bad.  I'd rather feel nothing.  It's better, it's easier" from One Tree Hill.

Please comment/message me and critique my writing so I can improve!  Thank you in advance! :) 

Also: This is my second poster EVER, so what do you guys think? 

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Wolf99 #1
Chapter 1: awww...soooooooooooooooo sad :( i want to cried now....btw,love your story sooo much~
jinju-angelicx #2
Chapter 1: Annnnnnnnnnd my parents are shooting me weird looks because i am bawling my eyes out right now.
This was heartbreaking yet beautiful at the same time </3
The last line got to me so much :(
Aegyo_Prince_93 #3
Chapter 1: I finally gather up my courage to read it~:((((( shooooo saaaad
Potterhead4Life #4
Chapter 1: And there go my feels ;~~;
Triple-Key #5
Chapter 1: Yeah, I kind of had more to say ... Accidentally pressed the err, posting comment button on the phone but yeah. This is great!
Triple-Key #6
Chapter 1: It's almost 3am, and I can't sleep so I decided to read a one shot. Damn, this is really good! I love super dark fics and you've definitely nailed this genre. Ugh, just the fact that I'm reading this really late is probably why I can't really elaborate specifically what it is I like about this. I just do. The plot is tight knitted and the final sentence in Luhan's letter really delivered that final impact from the fic
KpopSumii #7
Chapter 1: OMG WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME?!..TT^TT.. I can't stop crying.. It's so sad.. A-and you k-killed my deer! ㅠ.ㅠ
SHINeeWorld825 #8
Chapter 1: Aww soo sad!! But so good!
Aegyo_Prince_93 #9
just want to know is this an angst??? o___O i dont like angst~
KpopSumii #10
It sounds good~~ ^^
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