Balloon

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I felt my hands begin to sweat, but I clutched onto the slippery ribbon like it was my life.
But it wasn't my life.
It was a memory of you.
And I couldn't ever let memories of you go.
I held the string of the balloon to my chest tightly, feeling my heart pouding against my palms.
My life was falling apart without you.
I couldn't let anyone else leave me.
I won't let you leave me again.
 

Foreword

I heard some things.
I listened to some things.
I got sad.
I got inspired.
And...I wrote.

[no, this isn't some typical love story about breaking up and all dat shizz. im way more original than that. pfft...-cough-]

Please support me ^^

This has been entered in the [ d é s e s p o i r ] ❅ Writing Contest from Chenyeol and ZhangYixing ^^

WARNING 31/3/14: I WROTE THIS WHEN I WAS LIKE TWELVE I STRONGLY RECOMMEND CLICKING AWAY AND NEVER RETURNING

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milkyboy_khun #1
Chapter 2: Er ... Suju broke up? O.O
*cries* this was so well written ... You are amazing if you can write stuff like this at the age of twelve you are going to become a super-author when you grow up and yea I will but every single one if your books. Kekeke ...
Mbk :D:D:D:D:D:D
blissful #2
Chapter 2: awww sad but nicely written <3
ilovesungyeollie #3
Chapter 2: you dont know how many times i have shed tears because of suju breaking up... this explains those feelings perfectly. more or less.. this was really nice :')
zXRawrXz #4
Chapter 2: Er... Sorry if I seem ignorant or anything but the story just seems like a whole dramatic version of a girl who became depressed because Suju broke up? O.o It's sad, but strikes me as a little creepy as well.. :/ Sorry ><
Light-baekhyun #5
Chapter 2: Urgh, i just cant seem to get any tears these days...i am too dry. Your story is well writen and definitely deserve a praise but im sorry that i cant cry...
misfits #6
Chapter 2: Written beautifully. Good job !
GwagHyeYu #7
Chapter 2: im tearing up... hankyung....T.T
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