Chapter 1: update pleasu :) i wanna cry now when i read this

Chapter 4: Aww... This is so sad!!! Can you write a happy one next? They don't deserve to have only sad stories.

Also I noticed that your chapters have similar plots. It's okay to reuse the same plots, but don't do that too often. It's gets boring, if you want to use back the same plot, try adding a twist or surprise to the story. Make the an expected ending, a typical tragic romance story with a simple twist can bring you different review. Most people like plot twists, it adds excitement to the story.

Haha, hope you take my advice and improve your future chapters. Hope you update soon!