HOLDING ON

Description

Your feelings and your boyfriend Leetuek going to the army. How hard could it be?

Foreword

*so this is my first fanfic. hope you like it ^^

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mickeywithoutears
#1
Chapter 1: awww, leetuek <3
but i think this story could be better if you wrote a little longer :D This is pretty good for a first fanfic! But nonetheless, FIGHTING and GOOD LUCK for your future fanfics! ^^
Park_HyeSun #2
I think it's awkward that you wrote the story in the description instead of adding a chapter for it, honestly ^^;

The story's okay, it's just that the tenses are a little mixed up. It happens even to experienced writers, so don't worry! :D