The doll & his master

Description

An unlikely story of a relationship between a doll and his master.

Foreword

He was perfection,but everyone was Scared of him once he became alive. He was a love doll. A special one in Fact. He would turn into A human if his master loves him. But whenever he turned, they all grew scared of him, and they didnt love him no more. That Is, until A Certain redhead Appeared...

 

So...I'm already done with the story but I don't think that it's good enough...It's a really short story so I hope you guys won't get mad! Its my...second(?) try at a fic so....I really hope you like it. I put in a lot of time for this and even though I said that i thought it wasn't good enough, I'm still proud of this story. Please comment on what you think about it. ^^

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novitan
#1
Chapter 1: This is sad but also so beautiful. Their love is so beautiful.
Kyungsadistic
#2
Chapter 1: Oh my... I'm at my school right now, do you want to make me cry in front of all the class or something ? XD
potato_monsterz
#3
Chapter 1: Adaptation from lover doll? I had read a manga which end like this.. Btw, nice written..! But it's too shirt..