Come Back

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Come back...my love, my angel.  We shared such a short time together, our love had just begun.  Please don't leave me, without you here by my side, I am nothing.

Come back to me Hyesung.

Foreword

Warning: This story is really depressing.  I was just in an angsty mood.  It takes place about ten years after their debut.  I was inspired by another fanfic that I happened upon about Eric at Hyesung's funeral.  Please excuse any mistakes.

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Amalya #1
Chapter 1: This was a very bittersweet read, not only because of the subject matter but because of how your wrap it up. Funerals are always sad to begin with and you set the mood particularly well with the intro. You can feel the weight of Eric's grief in how he holds on and refuses to move at the coffin. I wouldn't have been surprised if he had gone last for just that reason actually, but having the members there to support him was touching and additionally heartbreaking.

The flashback sequences (more or less), were also nice little peeks into their life before that moment. I can honestly see Eric being this giddy little boyfriend/partner trying to surprise his significant other like that. It's almost cruel the way you painted such a lovely setting with what happened after. Though a teensy bit more info about the accident might have been nice. I do appreciate how you tossed in some of his coping measures; and weaving in real events from the memory (i.e. concert/award ceremonies) makes it all the more real.

I was definitely touched at the dance room scene. It was interesting to see the way they lashed out at each other, but only because they were both scared or concerned and were trying to hide their true feelings. Their confessions were short but sincere and they fit the characters. haha :)

And then how you wrap things up. Acceptance is always hard but it seems as if Eric might be well on his way. That last little bit of a flashback was a well timed spot of humor. Andy and his Kiwi Prince commercial. hehe Good job though. It was well written and flowed pretty well overall so thank you for sharing.
klauh1 #2
Chapter 1: So sad T.T
Sushii501 #3
Chapter 1: OMG, this is heartbreaking and beautiful.
It hurt's to think about it :c
chullie_samonim #4
Chapter 1: hiks...
TToTT
Hokaido--pie #5
Chapter 1: OMG, beautiful! just simply beautiful!!!!!! :3
followurdestiny #6
Chapter 1: Heartbreaking, made me cry... But well written...ricsyung <3
HyEric #7
Chapter 1: The way how you described him in the coffin...ah...it really broke my heart....if some thing like this happens to my hye sungie....i will die!surely I will die....
chaphy #8
Chapter 1: OOOwww so sad...poor for both of them...thank you authornim..for sharing such a breathtaking stories... ^^
Please write more Ricsung in future
vikeyy #9
Chapter 1: so sad..... i really dont know if it happens.... but nice story.... thanks for sharing....
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