Chapter 1: This is so heartbreaking :( and the worst thing is that this date -november 29th is my b-day :( and now I'm sitting here and wondering what would happen if he acctually died on my b-day :( oh, why are you doing this to me?
Chapter 1: Why was this so short yet so heartbreaking?? I just ... ach I can barely form thoughts cause this was so sad but this story deserves a good review.
For starters woah! I've never read a story were it came from the perspective of the dead person. Strangely it felt so ... natural. By that I mean there was no forced nature to it, Onew didn't make an effort to go out of his way to explain the situation in every pain staking detail. Instead, he subtly tells us what's happening through his feelings on it. His reflection really helps the reader decide how they feel. If its wrong for Key to move on or if its necessity.
I think through Onew's comfort at Key's happiness, the reader finds it too. And i've never thought of a 'ghost' (sorry idk how to describe Onew) having such real human emotions. He's insecure about being forgotten and at the same time he wants Jonghyun to fill the hole he left in Key's heart. It's tragically beautiful.
He cares about Key more then his own feelings.
This has to be one of my favorite stories you've written. I say it alot but thank you for keeping up the amazing writing.
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