Chapter 1: waaah I love the way you describe the place <3 nice sequel!!!

Chapter 1: Perfect.. love it

Chapter 1: One word : perfection. this feels so real

I forgot to mention it in my comment for Made of Stars, so I definitely have to include it here: I LOVE how you included Seoul's landscape and mentioned places and brands you can find there. I really liked your description of Hongdae and gave both stories that extra-real-feel touch.
I liked about Patbingsu the most, that you tried - and succeeded - to put in references to other stories that play in the same kind of universe - namely Everything Changes and Made of Stars (obviously). I LOVE this because as a reader I can play with this intertextuality, which I enjoy incredibly much.
I also liked that you put in Ga In a little more because she did play a role in Made of Stars whatsoever.
I also liked how Jongin and Kyungsoo treated each other, though I missed the sensual undertone that I was able to read in Made of Stars at some scenes (whisperin Jongin, for example) more clearly. But maybe this is just a question of personal taste and it wouldn't have been the ideal way to have them jump each other in public whatsoever.
Anyway, I simply love this for the intertextuality and feel like I can't point that out enough!
You did really well, Adele! <3

Chapter 1: and here we are yet again for another adorable kaisoo. i feel bad for soo there. i know how hard subjects are in eng. feels like heeeeell. patbingsu in caffee bene is yuuum. specially the strawberry one. aand that was random. sorry.
i first was abt to read that sebaek fic but then after reading the foreward, i decided to read made of stars first then this. so here i am now, off to sebaek.
hearty heart u adele.

ps im craving patbingsu now ;_;

Chapter 1: SUPER CUTE!!!!!!!! big brother!jongin is just the most adorable thing in the world, there is no way kyungsoo could ever resist him, seriously~i bet kyungsoo enjoys going on dates wih jongin and little sweet ga in anyway~~~~ aaahhh so cute their relationship is just so niceim happy for them????? and that sebaek overlap was so smooth~ too bad i read everything changes first, i wouldve been on edge to find out what sebaek were fighting about.... anyway, thank you for writing and sharing this addition to made in stars!!!! super nice. i cant wait to read more of your fics~!!

Chapter 1: I feel you kyungsoo T^T
i'm engineering student too.
such a sweet date ><
gonna read sebaek. /your sebaek's fic is my first sebaek fic i read.. XD

Chapter 1: Wow,.it's like chain stories,.hehe
i love kaisoo,. I read almost just kaisoo fic but curiousity strikes me about baekhun,.maybe i'll read that,. But i hope there's still kaisoo there,.