Chapter 1: I do feel what you what us readers to feel.. You write this beautifully.. You carried my emotions from the first word until the very end. And the song it fit so well..
Chapter 1: This is so amazing... You could almost feel the love emanating from both characters, especially when you read this with the music playing in the background. It made me tear up. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. Please continue writing! ^_^
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