I Can't

Description

Decided to write this because I was kind of in the mood for depressing/angsty stuff. The ending is crap because I had no motivation to really write a decent end for it. ^^

P.S. The foreword and sounds really corny. You can just ignore it. :P

P.S.S. I wrote a majority of this on my phone so ignore the spelling errors and words that won't fit in with the context of the sentence. My Swype can be pretty stupid at times.

Oh, and here's the sequel to this. I felt like the end of this one-shot had to be resolved. 

Foreword

Was the house supposed to feel this empty without her? He didn't think he'd feel that bad for kicking her out, but he did. Everything seemed to be washed in grey; she was supposed to be the sun that bathed everything in light. He wanted her back, but did he really have the right to see his sun again? Well, he certainly couldn't be without her. Without sun, all life would be non-existent. Without her, the person he was then was non-existent.

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beemichelle724 #1
Chapter 1: PLEASE PLEASE make a sequel ! (:
impxrrfect
#2
Chapter 1: the ending is not crap at all! good job! are you making a sequel for this?