Who Should I Pick?

Description

AJ, who was new to work at Starbucks, was nervous to meet the current group who had been working there for a few years. As AJ walked towards the coffee shop, he opened the door to see a feminine-looking boy wiping tables and he thought that he looked adorable. 

"Hi AJ! I'm Kevin! I hope to work well with you!" AJ smiled at Kevin's politeness and cheerfulness. Kevin walked off to the kitchen. When he saw a group of boys wearing black jackets, he knew they were trouble. When he saw a guy walking towards them with a tray of coffee, his eyes widened. 

"Here's your..coffee.." One of them sipped on one of the cups and suddenly threw the burning hot coffee onto the guy and he fell down. AJ's rage immediately increased rapidly.

"Your coffee's too sweet! C'mon boys!" They kicked him as they left, leaving the poor guy on the floor, shaking as he cried in pain. AJ ran towards him after they all left and when he saw the boy's scalded arm, he ran to the kitchen for an ice pack. After getting it, he asked the guy to take a seat. He puts pressure on the burn, making the guy scream in pain before crying again.

"T-Thanks..AJ but..you don't need to help.. I-It will heal.." AJ looked up from his scald to see a cute-faced guy. AJ knew he was an ulzzang when he saw his face.

"But..it looks pretty bad.." AJ couldn't break his stare on the boy, who was smiling.

"It's okay, it will heal eventually..." He got up before AJ could treat him again but he grabbed the boy's wrist, wanting to know the beautiful guy in front of him.

"What's your name?"

"K-Kiseop.." AJ smiled at his name before letting Kiseop go. He was another Seop, just like AJ himself. He sat down on the seat Kiseop was sitting on previously. He thought Kevin was adorable but he also thought Kiseop was good-looking and beautiful. How was he going to choose among them? Knowing that if he chose one, he might regret leaving the other. He looked up to see Kiseop wiping the windows..while wiping his tears. AJ knew he was still in pain, but Kiseop already told him not to so AJ left him be. He looked behind as Kevin walked towards Kiseop and hugged him when he realised the ulzzang was crying. AJ could tell both of them were best friends. But what the problem is that he finds them both very attractive, but which one should he pick?

Foreword

My second story! I'll try my best to make it interesting! :D If you weren't sure of the couples, here it is:

Hoonvinseop - Childhood friends

Vinseop - Best friends

Jaevin - Possible lovers

2seop - Possible lovers

Jaehoon - Friends

Hoonvin - Best friends

Hoonseop - Best friends

You will see this story to be very colourful :D Enjoyy!

 

 

Helloooo! It's me, KIttyDreamer, also known as Beverly! XD I'm just here to help out CherryMarshmellow, that's all.

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kiseopping
#1
Chapter 2: Oh, this story it really quite adorable. Haha.
I couldn't stop smiling as I read it.
Keep it up! c:
KevLene91
#2
Chapter 1: Hello :)
I just saw your story and read the foreword, it seems interesting.
Like, really.
This is going to be great.
BUT!
I just had to point out some 'not-so-recommended' stuffs in your story, sorry omg.
First off, just DON'T put smileys. DON'T. NEVER. It looks childish tbh.
Secondly, don't use '~' too much. Or just not use it at all. It sounds ajsjndjnd lol.
Thirdly, I do not recommend using a different text color other than black. Never change the font to a childish-like ones, too. Just.. use the font that automatically shows up when you type.
What I'm trying to say is, the simpler, the better. :)
The story is good, it's just that the way you type is kinda bother-some. Just keep it simple!
If you'd like to , then add some 'POV's' stuffs so that we can get a clear understanding with this story :)
Hope to see your improvement soon!