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Description

Running was stupid, but then again, so were they.

Foreword

This is my first B1A4 story in general, so i apologize now if it's not very /good/. I tired though, so that counts for something, right?

Orignally this was a one-shot, but i didn't like how it ended so i decided to write two more parts to it. Though i sort of hate myself for it since it ended up being depressing  angsty.

The main ship is Jindeul, but there is some obvious Bachan in the second and third part.

There aren't enough stories of my OTPs really anywhere, and i want to change this. Hopefully my writing isn't a disgrace to them... anyway's yeah, enjoy!

 

 

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yaleave #1
Man this story is the best out there no exaggeration. Can't you've a jindeul comeback now that b1a4 had their comeback. This story deserve much more ... I wanted to upvote but don't have enough karma :(
Comeback soon fighting
MisheeFrancheska
#2
Chapter 3: Deullie why ????!!! just forgive Jinyoung and be happy !! . TT^TT .. as much as it hurts Me that Jinyoung left Deullie to pursue his dreams .. I can never evr compare it to the pain Jinyoung feels when Deullie gave Up on him .. and then he still tries to get em back just to see him totally turned his back !
MisheeFrancheska
#3
Chapter 2: I was crying like crazy halfway of this chap. .. I can totally feel what Deullie's into . And then came Channie asking for some !! . like wth Channie ! I burst out laughing ! .lol ! . and yah ! Deullie how dare u gave Up on Jinyoung !! . I love u soo much but right now I just want to kick u !! TT^TT
TakuShin
#4
Chapter 3: THE EFFIN HELL I JUST READ? TT__TT WHY IT WAS SO SAD? :( I FELT BAD FOR BOTH OF THEM. I EXPECTED IT TO HAVE A HAPPY ENDING :'(
bbyungwoos #5
Chapter 3: Oh gosh why.............. ㅠㅠ how did Sandeul lose it in only six months after all those years omg I'm die.. And it wasn't entirely Jinyoung's fault sobs Sandeul supported him too asgdfjshsk ㅠㅠ
SillieSoozie
#6
Chapter 3: Im crying so hard right now.... :'( can't you write an alternative ending/sequel with an happy ending, I'm like dying here... :'(
luvfics02 #7
gosh! so hard 2 express my feelings with words but u're so gifted author-nim! Sandeul y can't u just 4give Jinyoung already? u deserve a reward. anyway, hope u write more Jindeul fics in the future. i would love 2 write 1 2 after i find a perfect plot 2 write about...<3 u author-nim!
Coprolite
#8
Chapter 3: How could you do this to me, I'm a sobbing mess. I was doing fine up until the ending, thinking that they'll get back together. It killed me to read the last sentence and realize that it was over and everything. Junghwan, oh god, please forgive Jinyoung so we can all live happy. Even though you just killed my heart, thank you for giving me something so wonderful to read
eisley22
#9
Chapter 3: omg, it breaks my heart so much!! i thought it would be alright..
it stabbed my heart a hundred times, thinking i was in their situation
, authornim deserves an award
HanaKyu
#10
Chapter 3: akjhsfkjafhgjasgfjkashkjfghdsjakhfjakshgfkjasfjksahjfkashfkja
Give me sec. I HAVE SO MANY EMOTIONS AND FEELINGS IN ME RITE NOW.
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OHMYGOD. SANDEUL-AHHH~! khdjfhaksjf JINYOUNG-AHHHh~!
WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY? #BRBSOBBINGVERYVERYHARDATTHECORNEROFMYROOM
This story makes my heart ache. The first fanfic ever to do that. T_T
Omg, but at the same time, I'm loving this. You wrote it so beautifully, author-nim. ;A; I am green with envy about your writing styles. So smooth~! Every word, every emotion. It is precisely displayed. No kidding. Every second, my heart wrecks like hell. Please make some more Jindeul fics cuz I'm addicted to it. lol CRAVING FOR MORE~~!! Eventhough it is completely angsty.
Keep up the good work~! *twothumbsup* Fighting! ♥