Eve of Destruction

Description

In 2264, the world declares war on Earth's newest species, the S4S16s. With their mutant abilities, the resulting fear has created the world's largest manhunt, with every government out for blood. One group of mutants have banded together with some humans in an attempt to try and save their race from being slaughtered However in doing so, they have now put themselves in the direct line of fire. The question is, will they survive and succeed in their goal or die trying? 

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Her heartbeat echoed in her ears as her vision failed her, pitching her into complete darkness. A second later, there was a crack, and suddenly she could see again. Panting, she felt her heartbeat speed up as she met the other girl's gaze. The stranger’s reaction was the same, with sweat beading on her forehead, and her face slightly flustered.
“What the hell was that?”

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“People see us as monsters, things that purely kill…But the truth is that I think someone is setting us up. Someone or a group of people.”

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“Guys, shutup! That’s not important! I-I think he’s dying!” 

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“Don’t worry,” He said softly, his voice shaking. “You won’t feel a thing.”

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“I watched my family burn, burn to death… And don’t tell me that my anger is unjustified, monster.”

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They were S4S16s. Jinri felt as if the ground had dropped out from beneath her. Her mind went blank even as fear began to claw at her.

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They were all going to die.

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Foreword

Warning, this story will contain violence, inappropriate language and later on, character death. As this is supposed to be an action adventure, and not an angst story, people will NOT be dying left and right, however it may look like from the description. It is also required you have a vivid imagination; I will try my best to describe scenes for you, but since this is taking place in a futuristic timeline, you'll need to be able to picture that.  

The main characters of this story are Infinite, Epik High, and various OC's. Other Kpop stars will be included (Boa, GDragon, Big Bang), but not introduced until later. It is not required to have any background knowledge of the groups; I am using their faces, their names, and to the best of my knowledge, their (tv) personas, and any references I make to them that Inspirits may know will not be important information. Again, you can read this and not know who Infinite or Epik High is, and still understand it. 

This story is based off one of my older stories, 'Black Hole Sun', and therefore will share a few similarities. However, as it is a rewrite, a do-over because of my mistakes and problems with the original, there will be many more differences. In case anyone was curious, I've decided to name this rewrite 'Eve of Destruction', a song written by Barry McGuire, as the song is about war and how people say one thing but do another; they're willing to fight a war but refuse to acknowledge it. This story will be sharing some of those darker themes, and I felt it suited. Not to mention I seem to have a reoccurring theme of naming my stories after songs. 

Aside from its Universe, the characters and some of its plot points, I hope to recreate 'Black Hole Sun' into something that will be remembered by my readers. I hope you all enjoy and thank you for joining me on this journey. 

-WhosThere13

Thank you to Francesca for making the poster and background for my original story. I'll probably be bothering you again for new ones.

Also, thank you also to 'Cereal Guy Reviews' for giving me very helpful feedback!

WhosThere13
Come on guys, if you're still reading this, at least give me oooone measy review, pretty please?

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wynthe #1
Chapter 4: Hello! So far I'm liking this a lot more. I can tell you're definitely going to add more depth to the story itself, the settings and the characters as well. I understand what you mean by introducing the other OC's sooner. When you said that BHS wasn't far from completion, I was a little surprised since we had just been recently introduced to the last few. I'm curious to see how you incorporate them into the story sooner now. :D

I do like that the girls were sent back with their memories erased (save for Sanghee! XD) and where it will lead to from there. Although I do wonder why Ji Ae and Jinri were 'missed' by Sunggyu and Sungyeol when they first moved everyone into safety from the tram. *shrugs* Speaking of which, I LOVE the pictures you drew of said Infinite members. They are amazing. I can see that you were inspired by the Assassin's Creed clothing for Sungyeol; assuming at least. :)

I am glad to see that you're trying to bring out their personalities a little more. In BHS, admittedly, the characters did sort of run together a bit, but now I can definitely tell these three (at least, so far) apart. Ji Ae's budding compassion/sympathy for the 'mutants', Jinri's hostility towards them about a past (that I couldn't remember happening in BHS) and Sanghee's posture and 'air' that does set her apart as a 'foreigner' to the others, and her stubbornness. Really. Great work. I can't wait to see more.

Am excited! Hopefully you'll still get inspiration to be able to get to the end of this story, because I'd certainly love to see how it pans out. Good luck!
GhostingA
#2
Chapter 1: When I started reading your story BHS I have next to no idea who's who in infinite so they are all jumbled up in my mind and thus I sorta wobbled and wiggled through trying to understand why they did what and if their personality figured in in how their powers worked. Also the girls... XD
but not to worry I now have found out more about Infinite (Ranking King is hilarious lol) and thus can grasp their personality better...

Furthermore, your chapters... are so long... I read halfway and I get lazy XD
so I tend to leave your story until I have nothing else to do and then slowly savour it, so by the time I read one chapter about 5 more would've already be added OTL
Therefore I'm bookmarking this one and reading it when I have time, and when I finally catch up I'll be subbing 8D Wouldn't that be nice~~~ XD
-peachtea
#3
Chapter 2: I can't wait for more now!
Reading the second chapter brought back so many memories of the original story