Perfect

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Cheers to my first oneshot. Did this in two hours so please be nice eh?

Foreword

 

Two months to live. Two more months of this living hell and I’ll be on the other side, with him. I could finally atone for what I did – for breaking my promise. Perfect.

 

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-X-n74aPIXQ - sad song to listen to while reading this.

 

 

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brandnewsekai #1
Chapter 1: as i was reading this, yume played, and then i was reduced into a ball of tears. ;A;

so sad, but, indeed, it's perfect.
Grey_Storm #2
Chapter 1: that was damn sad!!!
T.T
but perfect!!
Grey_Storm #3
Chapter 1: that was damn sad!!!
T.T
but perfect!!
jinjinlees #4
Chapter 1: OMG HOW EVEN ;___; OMG
sunshineyellow #5
Chapter 1: My heart is hurting so much from reading this I
;AAAA;
God I don't even know what to say right now, all I feel is sadness and I can't describe my feelings sob why am I so emotional rn ahhHHH
Well on top of it all this was a very well-written story ;v; I really really liked this save for the really intense moments where I was tearing up and I banging my head against the wall and screaming at my computer. ;; BUT THOSE WERE GOOD TOO
I also liked the subtle use of Jaejin's birthday, so romantic in a tragic kind of way. ;o;

The epilogue is what killed me. Jaejin's last line. Oh god straight through the heart.
At least they're finally happy in the end :'>

A very well-made story. Thanks for making me cry. A thousand claps for you ;v;
I can't wait to read more of your works <3
jaemieykakashi #6
Chapter 1: so sweet...n sad..*shed tears*...auth0rnim,u make me cry...
BubbleTeaRulez #7
Chapter 1: Awwwwwwwwww! This stoey was so sad and sweet at the same time >w<
At least they are both together now :)
Great job!!
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