He's Mine!

I'm A Guy Too~

 

<18 Dec~>
 
 
Heesun: YA! Im Eunhee!!
 
 
That's the queenka who loves Minki oh so dearly~ (yes I'm being Sarcastic.) 
 
 
Eunhee: what do you want miss?
 
Heesun: don't think Minki oppa have been treating you like this means he like you!
 
Eunhee: oh sure~ he does that to everyone!
 
Heesun: YOU!
 
Eunhee: what!?
 
Heesun: you better stay away from Minki oppa~
 
Eunhee: seriously? Be original can you~ *imitating Heesun's voice* you better stay from Minki oppa! Minki is not yours! He's mine! He is the Minki that I love! And he loves me too! So you stay away! 
 
 
Wait... What did I just say?
 
 
Ren POV
 
 
I was walking calmly till I hear Eunhee's voice...
 
 
Eunhee: ......you better stay from Minki oppa! Minki is not yours! He's mine! He is the Minki that I love! And he loves me too! So you stay away! 
 
 
I . Was . So . Shock that she said that so loudly!!!! OMG! I'm so proud of my Eunhee!!!
 
 
Heesun: How can you be so sure that he loves you and not me!
 
Ren: you want prove?
 
Heesun: Minki oppa!
 
Eunhee: Minki ah....
 
 
I kissed her! Yes! I'm Eunhee! I kissed her right on her lips! Oh my! I sound so ertic now! 
 
 
Heesun: this....
 
Eunhee: Minki you...
 
Ren: yes i love Im Eunhee, enough prove?
 
 
Heesun run away crying.... Oh great now I'm the bad person!
 
 
Ren: let's go home! 
 
 
I said with a calm voice~
 
 
Eunhee: so you hear everything just now? 
 
Ren: no I didn't~ mind repeating?
 
Eunhee: you!
 
Ren: let's go!!
 
 
I wanted her to say It loud and clear, wholeheartedly~
 
 
Eunhee POV 
 
 
He!!!!! Hmph!!!!!
 
 
<25 Dec, Christmas!> 
 
 
The pass few days I have been thinking...
Do I really love Ren...
I realise...  Actually I do... 
 
He takes care of me....
He is always the one there when I cry....
He is always the one who make me smile...
 
So I decide to confess to him... I called him...
 
 
Ren: Mmmm? Princess what's up?
 
Eunhee: meet at my house, 6pm!
 
Ren: why? Mummy having feast?
 
Eunhee: no... My parents having dinner outside...
 
 
Ren POV
 
 
Ren: so it's just me and you?
 
 
Nope! I'm not thinking sick! I just wanna spent time with her!
 
 
Eunhee: yup... I will be cooking...
 
Ren: OK!!!
 
Eunhee: so.... Bye for now...
 
Ren: SEE YOU LATER~^^
 
 
Eunhee POV
 
 
I should quickly go prepare myself!
 
 
Ren: EUNHEE AH~~
 
Eunhee: coming!!!
 
I open the door, and see cute little Ren is wearing a thick fur coat which his hood almost covering his face!
 
(awww~ so cute~^^)
 
 
Ren: why keep starring at me? Cause I'm cute?
 
Eunhee: n... No!
 
Ren: sure sure!
 
 
Ren just walk in like this... 
 
 
Eunhee: Minki, I...
 
Ren: ?
 
Eunhee: I....
 
Ren: say~
 
Eunhee: ILoveyoualotandihopeyouacceptme
 
Ren: what~? Say slowly I can't understand
 
 
Ren POV
 
 
I was joking~ I totally understand~it's just that I want to hear it clearly! Hehe~:3
 
 
Eunhee: I... Love you...
 
Ren: I love you too!!!
 
 
I immediately brought her into my embrace~
 
 
Ren: Aigoo~ I waited for so long! I vow to love you forever!
 
 
She just blushed at my words~ 
 
 
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OK~ END~^^ posted all in one shot because it's for REN's birthday:D please give some comments:D
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irenekim357
#1
Chapter 3: Awww this soo cuteeee (>∀<人)
love ur story^^
kikka6807 #2
Chapter 3: it's really cute :D
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
pandaKuku #3
Chapter 3: sweet and cute!!!! <3 . <3
SappireBlueS
#4
Chapter 3: So cute!
One thing though... you wrote like it was a play for a theatre... It would be nice if you tried to write another story but this time you'd try to describe things more (you already did that a little - very good)and use the usual sentences like: 'he said/answered/asked' and so on.

Now don't get me wrong here! I really loved your story. I just want to help you improve your writing skills.
The confessions were really lovely and I liked the wat that the girl didn't right away accept Minki - that means you actually thought the stiry through.
EXOkaichanyeolkris
#5
Chapter 3: :)) i like the story :)))))