wanderlust [oneshot]

Description

in which suzy stumbles around, looking for something

what it is, she doesn't know

all she knows is that she has to find it

Foreword

another oneshot my ING GOD I HAVE NO CONTROL

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slyferris #1
Chapter 1: Omg your writing is A++ you are A++ is general. It's so poetic and lovely. Usually I'm not really a fan of poetry and such but this is awesommeee. You just use all the right words and it's like, ow my heart. I'm bad at comments, but I really loved this :D
AnStHa #2
Chapter 1: So poetic. I think this is the first poem I've read in a long time. I just finished reading the Iliad for a class, but it doesn't feel much like a poem. Plus this is simple (not long drawn) and easy to understand, so I like it.
entropy #3
Chapter 1: I really really like the style! It's extremely poetic, and I think it suits you and the story... it flows really well and omg its so well thought out and fjsakdflsa CHARACTERIZATION. fjasld;f super awesome haha.
also the endinggggg. the fingers interlocking and breaths mingling OMG OKAY IT SOUNDS A LITTLE... hehehehe... i like it
its a story of fulfillment? (haha mentally of course... but physically??? heheheheheheheheheh maybeee or maybe my minds just in the gutter)
but yessssssss i liked this. MAKE MOREEEEEE :D
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