Hi Guys sorry for not updating but heres a Review ofmy story Comment if you thinks if you agree or not [Story Title]: Real Life, Real School [Story Link]: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/29622/real-life-real-school-ukiss [Author]: asianrocker721 & kpopluvr18 {co-author} [Main Characters/Pairings]: Dongho, Eli, Kiseop, OC [Rated]: Normal [Reviewer]: ll0vex3_her Title: 2/5 Nice title, but basically it's not something that would exactly catch my attention. It like too obvious. The first thought that comes to my mind would be: "ah, this is about real school". To those who watched it, there won't exactly be a new feel unless they seriously hope to find new settings, new dramas in that same show. So because I watched it already...so its nothing much and I basically brush it off, thinking that it'll just be the same as real school, most likely nothing much of difference. Poster(If there is one): 9/15 The graphic poster is so adorable! And it matches the theme: cute and happy. Description: 4/10 A little weird though. How could Krystal (OC) has a fear towards english when she's so good at it? People only fear a language, like in this case english, only because they don't know the subject, not familiar with it. Thus its really weird. Because apparently you're trying to say she doesn't know english yet at the same time you're saying that she's really good in her english..so you know the contrast? Everything's going kinda weird. Another thing, how is it impossible for students to fall in love learning english? I don't see the impossible factor in it. Forward: 5/10 Nice forward, gives off the basic information I needed to continue reading. Good job! Character descriptions (only if have one): /10 None, don't worry, I won't count the marks in. Plot: 19/45 Actually, the plot could be counted as interesting, but its actually very normal. High school love, like what's the big deal? And what more, this plotline isn't exactly orignally your's isn't it? You actually took it from the show "Real School" and changed it. Not that it's not allowed or anything..but it would be much better if you thought of one yourself. It doesn't has to be exactly original, it just has to be different from the show. Basically, there's only a few chapters and there's no exact explanation of how's the plot going to be like..so I can't be sure. Writing: 19/40 Well, it IS easy to understand. A little boring to the fact but generally okay. Apart from a few sentence needed to rephrase and rewrite, everythings okay. Spelling/grammar: 15/25 Mostly correct spellings and everything. The past and present tense was placed into much good use. Not much punctuation errors at the moments and grammer is basically ok. Just need to rephrase some sentences and everything would be much better and easier to read. Chapter 2: more than congratulation Krystal Correction: more than congratulating Krystal Ending (only if completed): /20 None, don't worry, I won't count the marks in. Rated scenes (only if rated): /10 None, don't worry, I won't count the marks in. Overall Enjoyment (bonus mark): 5/10 Not exactly said as enjoying. It was quite boring thus not really wishing to read much. Total: 78/160 Criteria: C