The Most Precious Gift

Description

Choi Seunghyun has it all.  He has a great career, a supportive fan base, a beautiful wife, and the greatest friends.  On his birthday, his wife and friends plan a special day for him.  Even though he thought his birthday would be entirely spent at work, he is about to have the surprise of a lifetime.

Cast:

Choi Seunghyun

Im Yoona

Choi Hyeyoon

Other talents from SM and YG Entertainment

​This is a one-shot that will focus on Choi Seunghyun/T.O.P.'s birthday.  This is purely fictional.

Please do no plagiarize.  

Created on October 14, 2012.

 

 

Foreword

Note from Sunshine94:

Hello there!

I just noticed that Choi Seunghyun's birthday is coming up, so I decided to make a one-shot for him just like how I made one for Yoona in 2011 for her birthday.  If everything goes accordingly, the one-shot will be posted on November 4, 2012 in my standard time (California, USA).  I hope that my readers will anticipate it! ^__^  Thank you for all the support.  

Notice for younger readers:  This one-shot will have ual references (hint:  Tabi's a bit of a ert).  I chose not to mark it Rated M because it doesn't go into detail with anything.  There's just a lot of skinship and ual jokes.

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novamp #1
Chapter 1: Can you make sequel of this story for the next Top bday ?
I miss this couple and i miss your story
bcupz_simpLe #2
Chapter 1: Good present on his birthday..hihii
Very sweet :)
Micielo #3
Chapter 1: Sweet ending!!! And a funny story good job authornim! Keep writing TopYoon please!
afiqahalya #4
Chapter 1: hahhha top soo sweet first want then so blur hahha nice job
bluish #5
Chapter 1: hahaha love it, wish u make a sequel for this wanna see more of these story ^^
Jaselyn_yoong #6
Chapter 1: Funny story
OnlyYoong7 #7
Chapter 1: cute!!!!!!! ENDING....... Authornim!!!!!!!
novamp #8
Chapter 1: Can you make a sequel please, during the pregnancy until the baby born
tq
krisbabe #9
Chapter 1: Continue please. I ship topyoon ^^
tissuepaper #10
Chapter 1: Oh my gosh...I'm not even a shipper of this pairing. I just came across the tag "topyoon" while browsing for a good fanfic. The two of them made a literally beautiful couple in my head, given that they're two beautiful human beings, so I took a stab in reading one. And I wasn't disappointed with this.

writing-wise, grammar and sentence construction were excellent. I may have spotted a very few errors, but totally ignore-able (if there's such a word, lol!).

Plot-wise, I thought the surprise birthday party was a little cliche, and then good thing I read on, thinking that maybe something really special will come up, and what do you know?! Yoona revealing her gift, and Seunghyun being totally dense about it was unexpected. Actually, I was on the same page as he was; I, myself, had no idea what Yoona's gift really was. You masked it well and it was effective.

Overall, this one-shot is sweet and oozing of romance. I don't think I would have asked for anything to be added more. This has just the right amount of details/information for a one-shot. If I would sum this review up in three words, I'd say "enjoyable and interesting!" But that would be boring, wouldn't it?

Thanks for sharing! And just in case you find this critique/review offending, I sincerely apologize.

Anyway, have a nice day!
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