Amber finds herself becoming more and more attatched to SHINee's leader after he finds her in a moment of weakness. Is this love or just her mind playing tricks?
Chapter 14: This was cute. I found the story through a recommendation page and it was an interesting read. I would have really liked to have seen a little bit more before the scene in the dance studio to give us a better idea of 'not falling in love' Amber, but beyond that, a lot of it was mostly relatable. The fear of rejection and worry and self-doubt on both sides was certainly easy to see and while I do think Krystal encouraged things a bit too much between HenBer, sometimes we do need that sort of nudge to make things happen. I was a little confused by Amber's personal confusion (since the general consensus was that she'd been talking about Jinki for about three months now), but how everything finally played out was nice in the end.
My favorite chapter was definitely the last one. haha It gave us a nice time jump with delightful flashbacks and their own jittery nerves about the announcement to the public. Well done overall and good job for finishing. ^_^
Chapter 14: I love how the story progressed. It wasn't too fast nor was it too slow. My heart squeezed from time to time and I just, Onew's too sweet ugh. This was beautifully written. Good job!
Thanks for sharing this! c:
Chapter 14: No,dear author. Thank YOU.
I had imagined Onew and Amber secretly dating. Even before this fanfic. haha
I would read any OnBer stuff you make. :)
Thanks again for writing this.
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