Atman

ATMAN

 

 “Can you see? “

“My mom and dad are finally going to give birth to me.”

“We are so happy for you Onew!”

“I hope your parents will come together soon too so we can all grow up together.’

“Promise to find us Onew and don’t forget! “

“I‘ll try. I just hope that you’ll come before the ‘loss’.”

“Onew, wait for me I’ll come right after you.”

“Off course I’ll wait for you. You have my other ‘ore’ as I have yours. We’re almost done with our last cycle we only have to make it this lifetime and then we can ascend.”

“Onew, it’s time for you to go. You have been conceived.”

“Yes Jaejong.I’ll see you guys soon!”

“Goodbye my love!”

“Goodbye Onew!”

“Goodbye Key, Jonghyun, Minho, Taemin and my Lae.”

*******

“Look at how pretty Onew is. Oh, he’s stretching. So cute.”

“Lae, it’s your time. Your parents have mated.”

“Really? Oh, Onew will be  born soon and Lae you’ll be close by him. You only have this to complete and you will ascend.”

“Key is right. We are still on our fifth so this will be the last time for us meeting you here, Lae.”

“Don’t worry Jonghyun, you will never even notice that seven life times have already passed as long as you and Key complete each of the seven together.”

“We will Lae, and we hope that we’ll be able to meet when we are reborn.”

“I’ll keep you in my heart Key, Jonghyun, Minho and Taemin.”

“Look for us!”

“Before the  loss!”

“Yes we will Lae!”

“I am so exited for the two of them. Finally on their last journey together. “

“Taemin and I are going for our third and it feels like we still are on our first.”

“That is because you have spent your life times always far from each other.”

“We just like the excitement of looking and searching way beyond the time of ‘loss’, but Minho how about this time let’s meet right away?”

“Sure Taemin.”

“Key, can we see Jonghyun?”

“There he is, so cute right?”

“Key!”

“Yes Jaejong?”

“Now is your time, you are to be born with Kibum.”

“Really? I am going to have a twin!”

“Yes and you better hurry up soon you are about to be conceived right this minute.”

“I’m coming Jae, bye Min, bye Tae! I’m so excited.”

“We are too!”

“Don’t forget our promise.”

“Before the ‘loss’!”

*******“

"Minho, your parents are planning for a second honeymoon trip. That is so sweet.”

"Maybe that’s the time when I will be conceived. How about your parents?”

“Still busy with my older brother, but they are planning about me so it’s going to be soon.”

“Then we might be reborn on the same year?”

“I sure hope so.”

“Minho you’re time.”

“But they haven’t gone to their planned second honeymoon yet.”

“What, you want to skip this lifetime? I’m about to send Taemin down, his parents are loving each other right now.”

“No, Jae, I’ll go now. Sure its cool to be conceived on a honeymoon but I’d rather be reborn first before Taemin does.”

“You and your notion of always being first, go on then, I’ll see you soon.”

“Bye Taemin, don’t make it hard for me this time okay?!”

“We’ll see.”

*******

"Jaejong, what’s happening to Lae?”

“I think her parents are fighting.”

“But why?”

“Her father has ‘fallen’.”

“What would happen to Lae’s mother then?”

“Her ‘ore’ will not attain its element for this lifetime.”

“Then she’ll have to wait for………….”

“The seventh of seven.”

“That is so sad Jaejong.”

“Yes, waiting for a new, one is always a long and sad thing.”

“I hope none of my friends will become a ‘fallen’. “

“What happens to the ‘fallen’ ones Jaejong?”

“The ‘forty-nine cleansing’ if he’ll do his atonement then absolution is not impossible, but if he refused, then eternal damnation.”

“Jaejong, look they are taking Lae!”

“I can see and it saddens me when this kind of things happens.”

“No! She has been . . . . . . . . . .. !”

“Onew will be crestfallen!”

“He won’t be able to find her in this life time or the next of next. What a tragedy!”

“Not only did Lae’s father interrupted his and his wife’s life force but also that of Onew and Lae’s.”

“Unforgivable!”

“Then he had turned his back to the ‘light’. There will be no absolution this time. No one will be exonerated with misdeed of this magnitude.”

“How about Lae? Will she come back here with us?”

“No. The ‘point’ is her place for now until, her mother’s ‘seventh of seven comes’. As for Onew, he will travel that rebirth until they are united once again.”

“Onew will have a lonely travel, Jaejong. Why do these things happen?!”

“It’s almost your time now Taemin.”

“Will I be okay Jaejong? Will Minho be okay?”

“Freewill is never an option. It’s every being’s right. If both of you chooses the path of light then you’ll be okay.”

“Goodbye Jaejong.”

“Goodbye Taemin.”

******************

“Where am I?”

“Welcome to the ‘float’ Taemin.”

“Why am I here? Who are you?”

“I am Yunho. I will guide you to your next journey.”

“Where is Minho?”

“Would you like to see him?”

“Yes Yunho. Thank you.”

“He’s still in the womb.”

“What happened to me? “

“The seed it not strong enough to complete your rebirth.  Those nourishments that are part of this era’s diet are doing crazy things to the seeds of life.”

“But I have to come at this time. My ‘twin ore’ is already there.”

“Don’t worry Taemin, you will have your chance of ‘rebirth’ you just have to be patient for a couple of years.”

*******

“Hello kindergartener, my name is Choi Minho. What about you?”

“I’m Lee Taemin. Are you in grade school?”

“Yeah, I’m on the first grade. What are you doing alone”

“I’m waiting for my brother. Oh, look! My brother is here.”

“Yah, Choi Minho, what are you doing with my brother!”

“Onew hyung! I was just trying to be friendly.”

“Stop worrying Onew hyung, I don’t want you to be sad.”

“I won’t as long as you are happy and chicken is my packed lunch.”

 “My brother the chicken-boy.”

“Hey Onew hyung!”

“Jonghyun, Key, let’s play with my brother Taemin and Minho.”

“I don’t want to play with Minho, he ate my eraser earlier!”

“Key, everybody eats your eraser because they are all flavoured and I have eaten a few of them.”

“Jonghyun, you did not!”

“Ummm,  . . . . . aahh , . . . . I did, yesterday.”

“Taemin, do you eat erasers?”

“That is so gross Key, eewwy!”

“Okay, let’s play then, only the two of us.”

END

 

* Author's Rambling

I hope you'll like this one.

I'ts rather vague story but yeah i love writting in this style.

This is a part of a bigger one and I am just doing a "Scheherazade" inspiration here. Read my first story and follow on the next few. If you're interested then I guess you can add me as a 'friend' so that you'll be aware when I post one.

Say whatever as long as it's decent enough for this site.

I'm not a proof reader so grammatical errors and mispellings might come but hey, so does everybody else!

Thanks for your time. Gamsa!

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squishychoo
#1
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........yu say this is for KIDS....
YET WHY YU STILL GO AND CONFUSE ME???
vagel_91
#2
I like this, even though abit confusing and it took me some time to decipher the whole story but it is unique.
kolmilyo #3
he, he, he. . . .<br />
thank you Arikethtae!<br />
Nikki1092 i'll make a full blown story of this i'll just finish "Lost" first.
Arikethtae
#4
I loved it ahah xD! I actually got it >W<