Chapter 1: Really a good story but although I like the fact that Hae grew up and gave his forgiveness it was just a little to soon. Yes they were all friends and all but to lose the person you love with all of your heart takes more then just three days to forgive.
Yes Tao suffered by being in love with someone he couldn't have,yes he suffered a lot and so had Donghae but think about it. The one who suffered the most before being removed from this earth was Hyukjae. To die by the hands of someone you trusted so dearly is a hell of a way to die and a painful way to suffer.
But still all in all this was a very good story, although sad it was still good.
Chapter 1: Wow, the progression of Donghae's mindset is very mature and moving. Despite what Tao had done, I guess Donghae didn't want to lose another important person in his life. Again, wonderful story :3 Your writing style is flows so well that I can feel what Donghae is feeling, like how timid he is or his slight annoyance at people's pity for him.
Chapter 1: I admire Donghae in this. It's never easy forgiving someone, no matter the reason. But to save his friend a life of complete regret, he shed a few years off his back. It's more painful because that was his close friend, someone who gave him and his lover, his blessings. And then snatched it from him.
But it's sad for the both of them. Sad for Donghae whom lost the love of his life. And sad for Tao, because his meaning of love is so shallow.
*And it's awkward because one of my friends whom is Chinese is named "Tao".
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