Chapter 1: I don't know how I missed this! This made me laugh so hard especially at the scenes where Himchan and Youngjae both ask Yongguk if he and Junhong are dating now. This was such an excellent little read! The kiss part was awesome too!
Chapter 1: You did a really good job of writing this. I like how you started at the confession, that way we know that Zelo has had these feelings for a while. I also like how you ended with the first kiss, that way the relationship doesn't feel rushed at all. It was a simple, good, mildly fluffy, fast read. I was also wondering where you got the quote "True love cannot be found where it truly doesn't exist..." or did you make that up yourself? Because I really liked it.
Chapter 1: Okay, seriously? This is just so utterly cute and perfect- not the part where Zelo was crying, but before and after that- 100% ah-maze-ing!! (Yes, I just went there. ><;;) the part where Zelo cried I wanted to flick Yongguk in the forehead for being a doofus! >3< hurting poor Zelo's feelings~ aish~ heehee~ anyway, loved the whole thing! ^^<3 *long winded* OTL
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