I don't want to let you go

Description

You are here. I can feel your touch. I see your smile. I love you so much. You say you love me too. I want you to stay with me, but I can't. I don't want to let you go, but you're not even here anymore. Where are you? Do you still love me?

Foreword

                                                                          

AN: Hi guys~ This oneshot is an entry for ~* You Belong With Me *~. I couldn't find the link to the poster, but it was in the rules to add it, so I added it like this xD Yes, I am a noob but a proud noob :D This is actually my second oneshot, so don't expect anything big. The story won't be a songfic or anything, but I might use some of the lyrics and it was inspired by the song. Not completely, but yeah xD

 

The prompt used in the story is 0330 by U-Kiss.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I actually wanted to write a oneshot to that song for a long time (because it's my favorite sad song) but I was afraid since I am sure that many people had  written fanfics like this before, and I didn't want to plagarize or anything. But since it is a prompt I can use it I guess xD I am not expecting anything from the contest, I just wanted to try it out xD

Credits for review go to Angel-of-the-Seas @ P a s t e l G a r d e n ❀ » Review Shop ♡


I can still see you. Your smile when I asked you to be my boyfriend. Your soft touches. Your feminine voice as you'd ask me for something.

Your rare pouts when you wanted something really badly. It's like you're still here, sitting next to me. You are holding my hand and smiling at me. 'But are you really here?' I wonder..

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FanFicLover92 #1
Chapter 1: ok...I'm crying...ㅠㅅㅠ...
that's hurt...at least Jonghyun still has 2Min besides him...
FanFicLover92 #2
Chapter 1: ok...I'm crying...ㅠㅅㅠ...
that's hurt...at least Jonghyun still has 2Min besides him...
tiffydn #3
Chapter 1: Omg.... I'm crying!!!! T@T this is so saaaaaad!!!!!! T^T
bluemoonluvkpop0596
#4
Chapter 1: Omgosh sooo sad me throughout the story *refer back to u-kiss 0330* u-kiss~ thanks for the oneshot ^^
fanficlover693
#5
Chapter 1: omg, want to burst into tears now.... :'(
Eunhaebetterthan
#6
Chapter 1: It was just so.. Beautiful.. It was perfect and touching, and really made me tear TWT I can totally feel Jonghyun's pain.. *sob sob* Excuse me while I go, cry out my heart~
VintageShawol
#7
this is so.. picture-perfectly beautiful.
shinee26 #8
Chapter 1: this was such a good story....im crying...i can imagine jonghyun singing So Goodbye in the background :(
yukimatsua
#9
Chapter 1: I was crying from the middle part to the very end. . .and hell!! even until now, while writing a comment ;_; why???!!!! why???!!!!. . . It's really a good story. . .I look like hell right now, because of crying over how well you wrote the story. . . :)please keep it up :)