Dream Snatcher

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It was like routine now. Every night, Jinki would just lie awake in his bed and make up stories in his head. Sometimes, the stories would be realistic and mundane; other times, they would be surreal, stories in which he was the superhero that saved the day. Only one detail was always the same in all his stories: he was never alone. Be it a significant other, an accomplice or a friend, there was always someone by his side at all times.

Foreword

My entry for the `~Cookies-N-Cream~* Writing Contest

emmmm.... I'll probably finish this today... probably. OTL

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Julettums #1
Chapter 2: You NEED to make a sequel. I'm so curious to why she just left him in the first place...
XiaoZhen #2
Chapter 2: OOOO....
Nice story. I actually like the ending. It's not that bitter sweet since Onew went back to being empty again and not into some kind of depression or something.
It's nice that you leave it just at that. It gives closure, but still with a hidden cliffhanger that allows reader to explore.
I'm honestly wondering how did Luna collect Onew's dream. And I honestly felt that perhaps Luna wasn't real, as in she was just a fragment of Onew's imagination that somehow come to life, or he just imagined it to be real. So everything that happened in the story perhaps just his dream.
I don't know. It's just me. I like to think too much. :P
nessadin0 #3
Chapter 2: Oh my gosh. That is so sad. I can't believe the ending. Poor Jinki! Dx he is my favorite and I love him. I'm so sad, but great story though.
JINGGGGGG #4
Chapter 2: OMGGGG poor jinki! nooooooo, i wasn't expecting a heartbreaking ending. sigh. but nevertheless, still a great story! (:
ParkMiyoung #5
Chapter 2: Poor Jinki, so did Luna just never come back?
e-mermaid #6
Chapter 2: omg... my heart hurts. -grabs handful of tissues- POOR JINKI. T___T
CookieDoughIceCream #7
Chapter 2: Lol, that's funny cuz' right before you commented letting me know you were finished, I was reading the final chapter xD Anyway, I'll be grading your paper, expect it soon ^^
CookieDoughIceCream #8
Chapter 1: Update soon. ^^ You still have 16 hours!!
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