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Dream Snatcher

 

 

Jinki wasn’t too sure how they ended up going on two, three, four more dates. The day they went to watch the movie Luna had chosen, he was a nervous wreck.  He wasn’t used to getting out of the house save to go to school, let alone on a weekend. Luna, on the other hand, seemed very comfortable, as if she was used to the awkward atmosphere surrounding Jinki. That reminded the boy of the way she acted on the first day of school, the nonchalant attitude she gave off. It made him feel slightly unsettled, but also helped him relax as it seemed she didn’t mind him being so… him. He never thought being in a relationship would be so easy.

 

Jinki slowly stopped making up different stories at night and, instead, focused on adding more to the one where he and Luna were the main characters.

 

 

 


 

For a moment, everything was perfect. Jinki couldn’t be happier.  Long forgotten was the boy who kept to himself and lived in his stories. Even those dreams seemed less beautiful than the world he was in now, with Luna by his side.

 

 


 

As the last day of school neared, everyone started making plans for the summer. Jinki didn’t even need a moment to think before he decided it didn’t matter what he would do, as long as Luna was with him. So when she told him her family already had a vacation in Greece planned out, he was disappointed, but he didn’t let it show. They could always go on dates when she came back.

 

She never did.

 

 


 

Jinki has always been a dreamer, for as long as he could remember and Luna was a collector. She made collections of whatever she fancied, whether people minded or not.

Her last collection, Jinki understood, consisted of his dreams. So when she ran away, he was left empty.

 

 



 

 

 

*Author's note: Finally finished~ I hope it was fine ^^" The ending seems a little... rushed to me? I don't know xD I just didn't really felt creative OTL not that I ever do really...

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Julettums #1
Chapter 2: You NEED to make a sequel. I'm so curious to why she just left him in the first place...
XiaoZhen
#2
Chapter 2: OOOO....
Nice story. I actually like the ending. It's not that bitter sweet since Onew went back to being empty again and not into some kind of depression or something.
It's nice that you leave it just at that. It gives closure, but still with a hidden cliffhanger that allows reader to explore.
I'm honestly wondering how did Luna collect Onew's dream. And I honestly felt that perhaps Luna wasn't real, as in she was just a fragment of Onew's imagination that somehow come to life, or he just imagined it to be real. So everything that happened in the story perhaps just his dream.
I don't know. It's just me. I like to think too much. :P
nessadin0
#3
Chapter 2: Oh my gosh. That is so sad. I can't believe the ending. Poor Jinki! Dx he is my favorite and I love him. I'm so sad, but great story though.
JINGGGGGG #4
Chapter 2: OMGGGG poor jinki! nooooooo, i wasn't expecting a heartbreaking ending. sigh. but nevertheless, still a great story! (:
ParkMiyoung
#5
Chapter 2: Poor Jinki, so did Luna just never come back?
e-mermaid #6
Chapter 2: omg... my heart hurts. -grabs handful of tissues- POOR JINKI. T___T
CookieDoughIceCream
#7
Chapter 2: Lol, that's funny cuz' right before you commented letting me know you were finished, I was reading the final chapter xD Anyway, I'll be grading your paper, expect it soon ^^
CookieDoughIceCream
#8
Chapter 1: Update soon. ^^ You still have 16 hours!!