[Short Story] December 30

Description

She was leaving in a few days, why did he have to do this now?

Foreword

2nd post for aff~

Once again, a Jaejoong fic ^^;;

this fic was supposed to be one shot...but it ended up too long (in my opinion anyway :/) so i decided to 'cut ' them into 3 parts.

I wasn't pleased with how the ending turned out..the 'flow' that..happened (lol) and the choice of words I ended up using. No matter how many times I tried to change it, I couldn't find the right words to end it. T____T

I would appreciate your comments and what you thought of the ending~ Thank you (:

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bettykzzz #1
hope you update soon:)
AsianKitten
#2
Chapter 7: More~! I want more~! Please?
dream_keeper88
#3
And because you took time to read my fics, i shall have the liberty to go through yours ^-^<br />
hihi, it was kinda obvious that the two liked each other<br />
But i loved the way you told us their story ^-^<br />
one last chapter right? aja!<br />
Thumbs up on this one!! ^-^
matsuyaney
#4
awww~ what's gonna happen to their love story
Emerald_Lee #5
omomomo i wonder what happens jae you should go after her lols awesome chappieas always :)
happi15 #6
I love your story!<br />
I can tell you put a lot of effort into the interactions between Yoomi and Jaejoong.<br />
Thank you for writing..... I can't wait for the next chapter!<br />
^_^
Eun_Ah #7
I must say, its a really beautiful story.. full of emotions and hidden feelings.. <br />
Anyway, so this chapter is a prelude at what we read just before.. which means, during all this time Jaejoong already know that Yoomi loves him and he is trying hard to make her understand he loves her.. but she is too dense to understand.. I think its time for him to confess to her straight away, as it will probably be the only way for her to understand he is talking about her all along and there is no one else in his heart.. but he definitely can't let her go.. and she can't leave him after his confession..<br />
Thank you for the update :)
piggy- #8
eeee..Yoomi left >.< <br />
Jaejoong better run and find her, I don't think that she can disappear off in less than a few minutes..can she? LOL <br />
update soon!~
Eun_Ah #9
aaww Yoomi left.. why is it so hard to say I love you when we're not sure if the loved one feels the same.. I hope Yoomi would understand, or hope Jaejoong would be more straightforward, so they wouldnt hurt so much anymore..<br />
Lovely story.. thank you for the update^^