Chapter 1: Monsters

Grim Virtues

 

Her vision blurred, going in and out of focus as she trudged through the barely lit empty streets, her breath coming out in laborious pants with only one thing on her mind: escape. She had managed to evade the men whose persistent footsteps still rung in her pounding ears. Leaning against the wall of what looked like a downtrodden hut of some sort, she let her feet stop for a while; the excruciating pain shooting up from her ankle forced her to bite down on her already bruised lip to keep from crying out loud. She did not remember how she had hurt herself there. It might have been the many times she had tripped and fallen on all fours, determined to lose her pursuers.

Tears finally rolled down her face, soft yet desperate sobs escaping her lips. Sliding down the wall, she let her head fall back against it, allowing all those pent up tears to flow freely. Finally. Finally she was away from them… those men, those monsters.

What had she done to deserve this? She shook her head when the self-pity driven thoughts crossed her mind, wincing at the pain that the action caused – after all, her ankle injury was far from the only one she had. Thoughts like that were only pointless musings that would get her nowhere.

“Over there!” The loud bark of a voice only too familiar jolted her up to her feet, panic taking over her every nerve. They had found her!

Run! Her mind screamed at her as a whimper of horror mingled with pain escaped her while she struggled to drag her exhausted feet up. Her heart pounding against her chest, tears dropped furiously from each corner of her eyes and her vision still blurry, she ran.

Yun Mi ran with all her might, but to no avail. The monsters were gaining on her.

“Ah –”

She did not know where she was anymore as the pain overwhelmed her; blocking out nearly every sense in her body. Somewhere at the back of her mind she could feel the filthy hands of those monsters on her skin, clawing at her, scraping off layers… there was screaming as well before something was forced into – the dryness of cloth on her tongue told her that. Her eyes struggled to blink away the blurriness as her head spun with the pain. The pain. She didn’t know where it was coming from anymore. She just knew she felt it. Maybe it would kill her, she hoped. Maybe the pain would take her life away before the sounds of them ripping off her clothes stopped, before the monsters break her bones completely, before –

A voice…

A voice that did not belong to the monsters spoke; somehow managing to reach her ears through the pounding and the sea of sounds that failed to make sense. Her barely functioning ears picked up the angry words the angelic voice. The world around her was spinning and she felt herself stumble out of the monsters’ grasp, falling onto soft ground. Was that scurrying feet she heard?

“Are you alright?” the angel’s voice drifted through the foggy haze of sounds. With as much strength as she could muster, the young broken girl pried her eyes open, fighting to keep breathing. was relieved of the blockage and with the last ounce of strength she had left, she looked up to see her saviour’s face; her last thought before everything was consumed in darkness being one of pained recognition. Her angel was Onew.

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SHINinglove #1
Chapter 9: This is also very beautiful cant wait for the next chapter
acasia #2
Chapter 9: This has got to be one of the best written fics that I've read! Brilliant! Thank you for sharing and making me fall for Onew harder! ;-)
mimi10
#3
Chapter 9: I miss this story!!XP cant wait to read the ending >.<'
yeowls
#4
Chapter 9: wow the last chapter is really hot and this fic is so good omg, really one of my favorites <3
I've already read two of your other fics and i think i'll start with the two others because everything was so good to read *___*
moiira #5
Chapter 9: I had a mini-heart attack reading this... The entire chapter is really... y! I mean, Onew being careful and unsure then the next minute, he's gone wild. I think it's y. LOL. I don't even know how to describe it apart from being y. OTL

But, you're ending it? Didn't see that coming. T__T I want more of this fic.
Anyway, it's up to you so I guess I have to wait if it's really going to end. Hee. :DD
alwaysBeWithYou
#6
Chapter 9: finally you updated. I really loved this chapter. I really really loved it. aww is it going to end? thats so soon. btw loved it. i hope your exams are going well. hwaiting<3<3
mimi10
#7
Chapter 9: dude.... OH MY FLIPPIN GAWD O//////////////////O I'm dead. No like literally...that was...hooo shizzzzz >/////<'
I was starting to listen to TVXQ- Good Night and started reading this at the same time and woahhhhh idk but set it all up together lol
There was something about this scene, the feeling to it, I really don't know how to put it out in words but I guess compare to others I read before it was just so lovey and full of passion then just straight up you know s*x. without really any feeling?... >///////<' Idk if I made sense or giving it too much though T/////T' lol
But honestly I think this was well done, I got the shivers Lol. And ahahahaha I see you did, I don't know I was just throwing it out there and I really didn't think you would but yeah xDD Sad that it's coming to an end D: but seriously this was really good!! Do keep it up!! Can't wait to read more from you!! Hwaiting~!! :D
moiira #8
This fic gives me a lot of Onew feels. Onew's character here is so different from the other fics that I've read. I'm glad I stumbled upon this story. I like it so far. Keep it up! :))
yeowls
#9
Another update *___*
I'll read it tomorrow (I need to sleep now ^^) and I'll tell you what I think :D
alwaysBeWithYou
#10
Chapter 8: ____!!! her mother is just ____. seriously. and onew and yun mi's moments were so adorable! loved it! and thanks for update :)