Overheard

❝Paint Me a Pink Star!❞
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Lay’s POV

“Damn you!” I muttered under my breath, pushing the laces inside the army style boots. My hands were trembling too much to be able to be able to tie them up. “C’mon, Hyunseung! You’re riding with me!” I pulled the red headed after me towards my car.

“Where are you going without me? Wait up!” Of course. Chanyeol just had to be there. It was all part of the deal after all… …

I pushed the gear level and drove away, following the other two cars in front. The snow was falling on the windscreen. “Tell me, Hyunseung. Tell me everything. Tell me what happened,” I spoke after few minutes in which I tried my best to calm down all that anger that was building up inside of me.

“W-we left with the snowmobile in the mist of the snow fight,” he started stuttering a little. I was watching him in the rearview mirror. “We went to see the view from the cliff you told us about last night. We got there, we saw the view and turned around to return to the cabin. It was getting dark. We took the same way, the only pathway that was going down the cliff. But I did something wrong and we hit one tree. I-I was scared because I didn’t find Moon Ri and I…”

“Don’t.” I looked ahead of us. I was in no condition whatsoever to hear his apologies. And after all he told me, I could figure out the end on my own. Moon Ri was in a bad condition.

 

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“Can I help you?” the nurse smiled at all of us.

“Yes. We are looking for a patient that was brought here half an hour ago,” Hyunseung took over as I knew no detail about their arrival to the hospital.

“Name, please?”

“Jung Moon Ri.”

“Oh…that Jung Moon Ri,” the nurse looked at us with a strange expression on her face.

“What? What’s going on? What happened to her?!” I flamed up. I had these horrible scenarios in my head with Moon Ri lying on a hospital bed, oxygen mask on and unconscious. Maybe she was in a coma and they didn’t want me to know… I glanced at Chanyeol. He was calm. Not poker faced, but calm. I felt like I could strangle him right there and then. After all, we were in a hospital and the doctors could do CPR in case of emergency, right?

“Wait here, please,” the nurse instructed us before closing the door of the ward in our noses. What exactly happened to Moon Ri?!

“Calm down, Lay. You’re making this difficult.” I turned to Chanyeol who raised his eyebrows as a confirmation of his whispering. Man, he had a dying wish!

“How is she?” I quickly grabbed the nurse’s arm as she got out from the ward. She just shook her head. “Is she…?”

“Are you her relatives?” We all turned around to see this old doctor studying all of us carefully. “Well, are you or not?”

“Friends,” Hyunseung shook his head, earning a glare from the old mushroom.

“I’m her brother.” That’s right, Chanyeol. Step in. Step in and find out what’s going with Moon Ri ‘coz I swear I’m gonna have a inside the hospital!

“Right. Well, your sister is having some sort of a crisis that worsens every single time someone enters her ward. So for the time being, it’s better not to enter in there, if you get what I mean.”

“What kind of

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kiky00joker
#1
Chapter 33: The end. I wasn't expecting such a happy ending >.< I'm happy Chanyeollie appeared in the last chapter...and Hyunseung was one heck of a lover. Such powerful feelings... I might get teary...
kiky00joker
#2
Chapter 18: What the - Lay e fratele?! Si atunci cine e Chanyeol si ce se intampla?! Ah tb sa mai citesc...si eu care credeam ca Lay o placea...pff =.= dar imi plac incurcaturile <3
kiky00joker
#3
Chapter 11: XD I couldn't stay away from this fanfic >.< I was supposed to be writing and maybe in the late evening/night to continue reading! What have you done to me?! Junhyung is gay? XD Oh boy, I'm going crazy here <3 XD
kiky00joker
#4
Chapter 3: De cate ori zic ca renunt la citit alte fanfic-uri, incep unul nou =.= creierul meu nu functioneaza bine.
>.< Imi place fanficul <3 Abea am citit 3 capitole si deja sunt captivat...din pacate e 11:30 si mor de somn dar exista si maine o zi. O sa iti las com in fiecare seara pana termin de citit :)
Btw >.< ahhh Chanyeol <3 dragutul de el...dc imi plac personajele zapacite?!
MoonSungRa
#5
I hope I'll fan girl over him too! ^^
ke_xin
#6
Chapter 33: Aigoo! So asdjfreakinperfecthyungseungasdjf happy and puddle of mush! Such a cute ending! The recording, the proposal, the kids, the gallery...just perfect! I'm so glad MoonRi survived and prospered, finding a new passion for painting and for her family. Omo, Hyunseung's kids are going to be so adorable! I'm so glad they stayed together! Of course, I'm also glad Junhyung finally got his Yoseob. Another great story, dongsaeng-ah! I can't wait for the next. ^^ Kitten hwaiting! <3
painful--doubleyou
#7
Chapter 33: Oh and....
AMBERRRRR!!!! <333
painful--doubleyou
#8
Chapter 33: I sincerely loved this story to bits! Everything, everyone, each and every chapter was just wonderful! Thanks for writing this beautiful fanfic!

Moon Ri, oh how I loved her! She was stubborn, she was sweet, she was smart, she was awesome. She can see, right?

Yong Junhyung! We went on a rollercoaster with this boy! He went from gay to bi to gay again. But, however, I totally fell for him! I wanted him with either Moon Ri or Seob so since Junseob happened, I'm very satisfied!

Hyunseung. He came suddenly but I am glad he did! He was always there for Moon Ri through thick and thin and made their love strong and sweet. The HyunRi/SeungMoon couple is adorable and very, very likable. And their children are precious!

Lay, Chanyeol. You really surprised me with these characters. Lay is actually the brother and Yeol isn't gay but loves Moon Ri. Extremely clever of you, darling!

This fanfiction was addictive, brilliant, sweet, dramatic, beautifully written, and mindblowingly gorgeous!!! I will for sure read your next story too!
gGiakh
#9
Chapter 33: all i can say is ,WOW..
painful--doubleyou
#10
Chapter 32: Awww! A baby named Summer! How sweet! But I'm a bit confused. This baby is Korean, right? So how does she have blue eyes?

JUNSEOB!!! <3 Yessssssss! They're a couple, right? So cuuute <3

Hyunseung and MoonRi are very adorable together :D I love this couple ^.^