Chapter 1: Squeetastic ^///^, this made me so happy. Daedae-yah is a sweetie. And Jello needs so happy. <3

Chapter 1: Can there be a sequal ?? Xxx please please please ??? :]

Chapter 1: kyaaa~~~ zelo's lips <3

Chapter 1: So fluffy!!!!

Chapter 1: awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~ that was......woah~~so adorable~~ kekkee..love it~!

Chapter 1: Two -and only- slash couples I love. Two slash couples that are rare. I'm talking about Himlo and Daelo; and I really am lucky to find such a good Daelo.

You know what, I hate a portray of Zelo where he is like soooo innocent and soooo oblivious. He's 16, dammit, not 10! So I liked that he's not like that at all here... The opposite even, according to some hints.

awwww~~~ it's sooooo cute!! ♥♥♥

>< Waaaah, such an amazing story!!!! I absolutely love it!!!!
Must hug you for this *virtual hug*
Floating on clouds now~

sjdjfidkxlshdkdbd i can't, i don't even, can i just love you forever ;aaaaa;

ok, first of all, daelo is my otp, and the way you wrote this is just sjdjsldn i cannot ;nnnnn;
ugh sorry im think i left my coherency at the door ;_; i love everything about this, the way you describe, the change of pov, the flow of the story, ughhh flawless ;aaa;

and sjdjsldjdjkdkdb omg i totally get the zelo being the more dominant one. i also read a lot of chinese fanfic, and they pretty much always have zelo as the dominant (and haha daelo is actually one of the most popular otp in chinese fanfic :3)
to me, zelo had always been the dominant one, i mean, if you look at his personality, even though he's young, he still fitted the type so actually i was a little surprised when i read an english fic that had him as a more submissive type haha
ok now im rambling D:

ugh anyways, i really really love this, thank you for writing this ;nnnnnnnn;