Lunch Date.

Description

Lee Jinki, the boy you've been crushing on for some time now, asks you to have lunch with him at school on the roof top~ 

Foreword

Students pour out of the class rooms, hustling and bustling to get to the cafeteria. On any other normal day, I'd be right behind them, getting bumped and pushed down the stairs, but not today. No, today I was waiting for someone. 

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sweet-suzy #1
Oh wow! This is amazing!
Feedback? I don't think there was a single grammatical error, the story flowed well and you started the new paragraphs when needed. Overall, a fantastic story and a pleasure to read!

I loved it! Well done Author-nim!
KpopLoverSelina #2
Very Sweet. I love it. I wish that happened to me.
ParkMiyoung #3
You don't need any feedback; it was amazing! It was very sweet, but certainly not fluffy, there was only a kiss on the cheek in the end which is more natural at that situation than immediately a kiss on the mouth and it was very well written. I can't remember any grammar mistakes. Good job! I loved it <3
lwyCarmen #4
So cute! <3
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