Working with SHINee part one

Working
"Okay today you'll be working with.....SHINee! Mr.Park said. "Arasso now what do I do now" You asked. "Come with me and I'll take you to where you to where you need to be but you will not be able to keep them waiting for a long time" Mr.Park said. "Then what are we waiting for come on" You said running off. "Wait up, aish I'm to old to be running" Mr.Park said. "I'll take her Mr.Park" A person said. "Thank you so much but didn't you have to work with your band today, Yesung" Mr.Park said. "Oh it was canceled they wanted us to help out around here" Yesung said. "Super Junior's Yesung is behind me NO WAY so cool" You thought. But then Yesung started walking away! "Hey wait up Yesung" You yelled. Then Yesung stop walking, "Yeah what can you or can't you chatch up" He said. "Just wait up where are WE GOING Yesung before I call Heechul on you I know his phone number SO TELL AND WALK SLOWER" You said.
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lynnie-chan
#1
Chapter 1: Cool story~

Maybe you could separate the paragraph when different people speak? It's kind of hard for me to read it when it's one big paragraph 3:
FTiNo1
#2
Ohh sounds really cool :O I'm totally looking forward to your story C: FIGHTING!!