myungyeol is here

Description

sungyeol mad when he see sungjong give a peck in myunsoo cheek.

Foreword

this is my first time make fanfics,

hope you guys like the story

give the comment :D

and FYI english is not my mother language.

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Bright5 #1
AWE SOO CUTE~ It's pretty good for your first oneshot, although you need a few tweaks in grammar and punctuation, you also need to capitalize letters, and rearrange the paragraph a bit. Not to judge though, I mean, English isn't even my first language :P But overall, THIS WAS AN ADORABLE ONE SHOT~~~ ^^
chodding_ #2
Super cute omg!!
Though you should improve your writing skills. I think you'd go further than this. And you should make this a chaptered fic! It would be really cute!!! Hwaiting author-nim!!!
MasterL #3
cuteeee.
But i think you should make it a little longer~
well, the main idea is soo cliqué but myungyeol always going cliqué right? lol
looking forward for the next fic of you<3
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