Against the World (Hope)

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"Cuz it's us against the world"

"I'm hopeful"

 

I...Kim Joonmyun...tell you a story of myself...Kim Jongdae...and Wu Yifan who'd rather be called Kris

This was how it all started....

 

 

 

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Foreword

 

 

 

A/N: I am so sorry if this does not completely make any sense…because I wrote this out of mere disappointment and sadness… Literally I did… I wanted to vent out my frustrations (and what a better way to do that by writing about something…) because I just had the worst of all worst of days…but I guess when I started to write this…I wanted this to be super tragic…but like always…I’m a sorry sappy person for a lighter mood after I re-read everything…

Anywho…I hope you guys enjoy though….

 

Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. The characters used in the material are only for the plot of the story. Everything and anything that's happened in the story are coincidental to any "actual" events that has occured recently or in the past.

 

**There is five parts to this supposedly Drabble... I was thinking maybe I should make this a one-shot...but then...I didn't want to think too much about it... when I wrote this... I thought of three things...sadness...acceptance...and hope

While thinking about that... I also thought of a book... and started writing along with one song... but thought of another song as a title to this drabble... Everything around me was just all jumbled together...so please... Bare with me... 

 

 

 

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Finally I got rid of the M!! [NOT ACTUAL UPDATE JUST AN EDIT]

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ThatOneOtherWriter
#1
Chapter 1: This, my friend, was simply beautiful. The images were so breathtaking, so warm and so cold at the same time. The mixture of truth, regret, penance and acceptance was just...

I absolutely loved this. It's the second ever SuChen that I've read but it's probably going to be the one I love the most of all. It takes a lot to make me feel the words of a story and this had me at the edge of tears. It's so like Suho to be so caring, so loving, so understanding. And though Kris may have his moments, he to has a heart of gold that could have been carved right out of what was left from making Suho's.

This was just gorgeous. I want so say so much more about it, but I'd only end up repeating, with all the synonyms I could think of, just how amazing this was. Hats off to you. Goodness, you're a gem in the world of angst.

The pic spam at the end wasn't cheerful at all, sadly. It's like a flashback to what was, what is and what could have been. Just, it leaves me all aflutter barely held by the wind of my own sanity.

ACK! I just love this, okay? T_T
MK_HenryLau
#2
Chapter 1: Gosh.... I love SuChen and KrisChen!!! But yes... This is really gorgeously written.... I love angst... And this is a really great angst story :')
KKkkkk #3
Chapter 1: i'm actually a die hard suchen here but hhehe krischen isn't that bad at all hehe and hey this is beautiful ^^
eudaimonia #4
Chapter 1: this is so beautiful omg ;o;
at first I was confused but after I saw your note ;~~;
I reread this story and cried alsdkajd
orangeluver
#5
Hi! New reader here :D

This is so sad and yet very beautiful. Eventhough I'm not really into SuChen but their past relationship is so touching, and it really breaks my heart when I notice that Suho's already...urgh, I can't take it anymore! It's really sad!

And the KrisChen..(OTP!) Kris you're such a gentleman. You understood Chen really well and always ready to be with him, to comfort and love him. You guys are really made for each other, seriously ;A;

'Three of us against the world', my favorite :D

What a good story, and I don't regret reading it! Keep up the good work author-nim! :D
aosoira
#6
this is the kind of angts fic i like the most, one that make me cry a river due to the angsty of it (i do, it's been quite awhile since the last time i did) but end up cry a happy tears.
=]
at once i thought it a story of friendship, with a hint of romance ofcourse if not a full story of krischenho sandwich(i'd ike it if there's one,chen be the uke for sure); turn out be this flow of thought:
1. oh, is something happen to yifan?/he seems out of picture (as in both the portrait&most of the story)
2. still jst suchen, jongdae haven't over mourning whatever happen between them.
3. /rather confuse with the progress of this story. does joonmyun somehow being egoistic and force all the suchen thing? but their relationship seems perfect n like jongdae is not being reluctant, unwilling, whatsoever.
4. oh gull, /mentally sit it the corner of my room mourning over my slow ability of analizing the whole situation. joomyon is dead, ofcourse he's dead. you have throw the hint from the first time already but i just well -there's something happen in implicit way, what?, what is it? oh better keep going read the rest- ugh, i shouldn't just ignored the awkward position when joomyun comforting jongdae, why jongdae cried on his palm & not on joomyun shoulder instead, & yeah why joomyun only hold him from the side when he could embrace jongdae into comforting hug so the whole cry situation would be more comfortable to both of them. and then the way joonmyun was somehow not in the room. *normally i'm not this pitiful, it's either the morning or basically i'm kinda in nerve wrecking state right now. oh well~ kkk
5. finally yifan show up. he's so adorable here. awwww
nah, this is more like rant than a comment. i'm sorry :(
txkyu for sharing this beautiful fic.
and umm, just fyi, i don't know wether it just me but i can't find ur fic on either chen/krischen/chenris/suchen tags. i found it trough ur profile.
oh, would u like to befriend me, please?/bat eyelashes
poutingaegyo
#7
Omg! you told me that my SuChen fic is sad then what is this?

This is so sad that I could fill in a hundred of buckets with tears!

but at least chenris.

I dunno if I should be happy or sad. This is just so pathological.lols