Ae Fond Kiss [On Hold]

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Ae fond kiss, and then we sever
Ae fareweel, and then for ever!
Deep in heart-wrung tears I'll pledge thee,
Warring sighs and groans I'll wage thee.
Who shall say that Fortune grieves him,
While the star of hope she leaves him?
Me, nae cheerful twinkle lights me
Dark despair around benights me.

I'll ne'er blame my partial fancy,
Naething could resist my Nancy
But to see her was to love her
Love but her, and love for ever.
Had we never lov'd sae kindly,
Had we never lov'd sae blindly,
Never met-or never parted,
We had ne'er been broken-hearted.

Fare-thee-weel, thou first and fairest!
Fare-thee-weel, thou best and dearest!
Thine be ilka joy and treasure,
Peace, Enjoyment, Love and Pleasure!
Ae fond kiss, and then we sever!
Ae fareweel alas, for ever!
Deep in heart-wrung tears I'll pledge thee,
Warring sighs and groans I'll wage thee.

Robert Burns (1791)

 

 

I always thought that I wouldn't fall in love this easily like all my friends did. They seem to look at girls and fall immediately for them. For me, it took only 3 seconds to fall for her. Just like that.

1..2..3..Three seconds which seemed like an eternity. Three seconds in which she walked by, looking at her friends, laughing. Three seconds in which my world stopped moving, in which I stopped moving. Three seconds...and after that my whole world began to change.

I just stood there, staring at that tall girl, mesmerized by...well by what? Her big round eyes, these dark brown orbs which were twinkling like stars? Her fluffy long hair which framed her face while shining in the sun light like liquid silk? Her puffy cheeks, which revealed her cute dimples whenever she smiled? Or was it her smile, a smile that was so infectious, that, whenever I thought about the first time I saw her, I smiled like an idiot? Her laughter which sounded like a carillon, so bright and clear? The way she shook her head lightly when her bangs were falling into her eyes?

And then I realized. What made her so special, was her charisma. Whatever she did, whether it was talking, smiling or even just looking at something, she always seemed to shine like a star, lighting up everything and everyone around her. This girl had the ability to make all the people around her happy just by smiling at them...well at least it applied to one person.

And this person wasn't supposed to be me...

 

 

 

Foreword

Okay...so...this is my 4th fanfic and it deals with an unrequited impossible love. Main characters of this story will be Kyuhyun and Sooyoung...like in all of my other stories...Oh and...it's the first time I wrote in a character's perspective so it might sound strange from time to time... 

The poem at the beginning...well...actually it's a song but since I've never listened to it but only read it I'll consider it as a poem...was written by Robert Burns, an Scottish author. I personally really like this poem as it perfectly shows the emotions of a couple that has to part and probably will never see each other again.

mmh...maybe some of you noticed that I already uploaded it once but due to the server change this story kinda got lost...so I decided to upload it again. If it happens to appear again...I think I will just delete the other version...and maybe some (?) will also notice that I took the first chapter as the description...

Well...anyways...I'd be happy if you subscribe to the story and comment a lot.

Kamsa hamnida :3

 

And I also want to thank ☆ ⓢPARKLE ⓛIGHT ⓡEQUEST ⓢHOP ♕ for this absolutely amazing poster!

 

And if you don't know my other stories yet, just click on the links below...I listed them in the order I released them...oh...and they're not completed yet...so for now I have 4 ongoing stories, but I'll try hard so I'd be happy if you give them all of my stories lots of love! 

 

You're my star

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/75923/you-re-my-star-donghae-fluff-kyuhyun-kyuyoung-snsd-sooyoung-suju

Step by Step to Heaven

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/122645/step-by-step-to-heaven-kyuhyun-kyuyoung-romance-seohyun-snsd-sooyoung

Let Me Hear Your Voice

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/154411/let-me-hear-your-voice-changsoo-kyuhyun-kyuyoung-soowon-sooyoung-supergeneration-soohyuk

 

 

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sapphirefrogeggs13
276 streak #1
Chapter 3: I'm really enjoying this so far, but all the foreshadowing is making me so nervous!!! Even if they split, I do hope they reunite much later for a happy reunion or something...
soshi16
#2
Chapter 3: Please let this be a happy ending :-( kyuyoung fighting! Author-nim fighting!
Chocolate_loves #3
Chapter 3: Plzzzz happy ending!!!!!!!
Update soon please
ss1012
#4
Chapter 3: Ehh? Why did you say it Soo?? :(
akxshi #5
Chapter 3: The last part omo i wish it didn't true ;A
ShyPopcorn
#6
Chapter 3: *You can't tell anyone about the wish you make when blowing out birthday candles...because then that wish won't come true...never ever.*

is that true ?
cho_sooyoungknight
#7
Chapter 2: yaaaaaaaayyyyy it's so cute....
i'm really melt with this kind of romantic way of them.
update soon..
i can't wait for the next update....
cho_sooyoungknight
#8
Chapter 2: yaaaaaaaayyyyy it's so cute....
i'm really melt with this kind of romantic way of them.
update soon..
i can't wait for the next update....
randomyetlovelypairs
#9
Chapter 2: Waaah that was so cute I was giggling the whole time reading this!! <3 looking forward to the next update and I'm wondering what will happen soon :))