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THE LONGER VERSION :)

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21GerBear #1 Feb 11, 2013 23:56:23

Chapter 2: You should make it longer !! :D I just became a jellie ! And I need my bias hehehe

creamfeathers #2 Jan 28, 2013 19:23:31

Chapter 2: Make it longer!! Such a sad oneshot! T^T

craxybaby #3 Dec 1, 2012 03:05:35

Chapter 2: make it longer :)

CatInTheBox #4 Nov 25, 2012 06:37:05

Chapter 2: Omo! Please unnie, make it longer. Wuaaahh! Fangirlin'

CatInTheBox #5 Nov 25, 2012 06:36:58

Chapter 2: Omo! Please unnie, make it longer. Wuaaahh! Fangirlin'

11ninja #6 Oct 23, 2012 14:01:27

Chapter 1: make the story more longer

riacho15 #7 Aug 9, 2012 23:19:13

I found the idea of writing it when I was watching sort of a gangster war type of movie.....so that's why it came off sad I guess

candyforlove #8 Aug 9, 2012 23:13:22

Why so sad????