My Biggest Mistake

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This is written when Jonghyun is going out with Sekyung, and Key is in love with Jonghyun but can't say anything.

Foreword

This is written for a contest:

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/245865/blinded-by-words-writing-challenge-2ne1-bigbang-oneshot-superjunior-writing-writingcontest-writingchallenge

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Meru-chan #1
K-key.. Q__Q
Ilonahaku #2
It was nice, but I wouldn´t mind if it was a little bit longer. ^^"

I like especially the first paragraph about the pain which is like a knife stabbing him.
Yes, it is sad that even with all his love he can´t put such a smile on Jjong´s face. :/
But Key shouldn´t think that he is nothing just because Jjong treats her like a princess, but I understand that he feels that way. ^^"
But I am sure one day Jjong won´t look just at her...
I feel sorry for Key, but he must know the saying - if we fall in love with someone, it is usually a wrong person, and when we fall in love with the right person, the timing is wrong. :/
SHINee4ever5 #3
It's more the fact that Key is in love with Jonghyun who is in love with sekyung.
I'm not sure about a sequel, I might, but it would be a happier on, since I don't like writing sad stories >.<
SuNnYjOnGkEy #4
That is really sadT^T
But theres not jongkey moments3:

Is there a sequel???
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