Perfection

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Perfection

Can one create perfection?

Can one fall in love with perfection?

Can one be perfection?

There's a price to pay for perfection. One that can cost you dearly.

 

Foreword

Luhan swallowed the pills, his eyes never leaving the painting. As he felt drowsiness take over him, he slowly closed his eyes. Just before he completely out, he swore, he swore, the person in the painting smiled. It was a comforting smile, as if to say,

I'll take you to my world. I'll take you to paradise, where we can be together forever.

Luhan smiled back. Then, he fell into an eternal slumber. A slumber where he lived in his dreams, with the one whom he loved.

Perfection.

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Based off:

「Leia」 by Yuyoyuppe-P

「Pygmalion」 by George Bernard Shaw

 

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A/N: I know, I know. Whaaaaaaaaaat? Another one-shot? Go work on your chapter fics! ...

Sry ;__; I wrote this as a spur of a moment thing when I woke up at like... 6 or 7 in the morning when I was on vacation (damn jet lag). And then.. yeah. Finished it the same day. It's based off a beautiful, beautiful song called 「Leia」. It's a Vocaloid song produced by Yuyoyuppe, who produces the BEST screamo songs. They're freakin epic. .... Epic... If you want to listen to it, here it is:

「Leia」

The version I'll be posting as ... an "OST" for this fanfic will be different, but listen to this anyways. :) If you watch the video, it's pretty obvious that my story was derived from there.

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bexiah
#1
Chapter 1: oh Kris, you poor thing TT This one was beautifully written. I could feel every emotions on it :')))

btw, I skipped the last part, can't ruin my krislu mood :p
jongstitch
#2
Chapter 2: This is just.... amazing.
Minspro
#3
Chapter 1: This was beautiful...really heartbreakingly beautiful.
Reading this, I felt some sort of hauntingly eerie sense wash over me from Luhan's obsession, and Kris' one-sided love. It was chilling yet incredible.
And then as they were all 'reincarnated', I guess...it was a happy end for Luhan, but I can't help but wonder if Kris has the memories from his 'past life'.
I dunno...this was really good though. ^^
hardcorefan
#4
wow. just wow o_O
this is beautiful. poor kris though ;A;
krisluhan94 #5
I can't say anything.__.
xxvanilla-ice #6
You... killed Luhan TT^TT my heart just broke... and then it broke even more reading about Kris's feelings.
I... loved this story, author-nim. It was well written and very emotional. Amazing work, really <3